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| Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic |
12/30/2003 |
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..hmm..and WHICH are YOU??..LOL! c'on tell us!!!
Lovely write...
alas chivlary isn't in..darn!!!
Vesna ..:) |
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| Reviewed by Crystal-Rain Love |
12/23/2003 |
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Wow. This is the most beautiful poem I have ever read. You are a rare find, HH!!
Crystal-Rain |
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| Reviewed by Susan Cook-Jahme |
12/21/2003 |
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| Very creative write :0) |
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| Reviewed by Zenith Elliott |
12/19/2003 |
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| Well said and well written...~Z~ |
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| Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw) |
12/19/2003 |
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Hmmmmmm, how good looking are they? giggle.... You are a romantic, aren't you? I love the flow, and the beauty in your descriptions... so breathtaking, like the sunrise.... sigh....
In Spirit,
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| Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya |
12/19/2003 |
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| sweet sweet write....superb!!!! |
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| Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie |
12/19/2003 |
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Oh how very lovely, this was just beautiful,
Reindeer |
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| Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero |
12/19/2003 |
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Very cleverly done! But now here I sit... ini, mini, mini, mo... gee... I'm real bad at making decisions... it'll have a well balanced blend.
Carmen |
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| Reviewed by Kate Clifford |
12/18/2003 |
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| I'll reach for the stars :-) Wonderful creative write! |
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| Reviewed by Marilyn Seray |
12/18/2003 |
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gasp! Good Lord, I feel my face tingling with blush. The imagery made it me...
Beautifully done |
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| Reviewed by Laura Via |
12/18/2003 |
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It would seem to be that the art of chivalry is gone ... except in writing. Grand write, so very grand!
Cheers
Laura |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
12/18/2003 |
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| You make the choice obvious in this original write. Thank you for this offering. Love and peace, Regis. |
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| Reviewed by Christine Morell |
12/18/2003 |
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A most creative and unique poem..beautifully done
~Chrissie |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
12/17/2003 |
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a meaningful man must encompass both ...
excellent comcept! |
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| Reviewed by Marie Wadsworth |
12/17/2003 |
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| I agree with Eileen. I want both. I would not want to choose. I think a man has to be some of both: ordinary and chivalrous. I enjoyed this a lot. One of your best. |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
12/17/2003 |
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| I want both;-)Handsum, this is so beautifully written!It would be hard to choose, but the ordinary man is more realistic and more likely to last...sooooo...it depends on what your looking for;-)Excellent concept and great entertainment!ty! |
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| Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) |
12/17/2003 |
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SIGH!!!!!!!!!!
"A man of chivalry
Would capture
The beautiful light blueness
Of the sky
Upon his lips and seal it
In her eyes with a kingly kiss
Highlighting them
With the beauty of heaven"
EXCELLENT Handsum.
Lady peg
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| Reviewed by Trixie Love |
12/17/2003 |
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Hi Ron,
What a beautiful write...
Again, it is so wonderful
to know that men could
reach this depth...
Beautiful as always...
Happy Holidays...
Trixie :) |
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| Reviewed by Evelyn Simon |
12/17/2003 |
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Both. :0)
Thank you for this write, it was excellent. |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
12/17/2003 |
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Good question!!
I will pick the one who penned this beauty!!
< < <Wink>>>
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Amor Sabor |
12/17/2003 |
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Great example of Romanticism. Beautifully done.
Amor |
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| Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU |
12/17/2003 |
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"An Ordinary Man Or A Man Of Chivalry (Choose)"
This is uniquely fantastic!
Very wit-wise composition to inspire and to strike thoughts.
Drink the dews of happiness for this work has reached its completion.
Thank You.
Congratulations!
May You enjoy a Memorable Season.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
FOR A COUNTRY OF LOVE AND TOGETHERNESS
IN AN EMPIRE UNDER THE SWORD OF JUSTICE. |
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