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| Reviewed by Sheila Roy |
12/23/2007 |
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Paul,
A brilliant play on words with many messages along the way. This one takes a slow read-through so nothing is missed. Fantastic work! -Sheila |
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| Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) |
1/8/2004 |
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| Blimey not only clever but leaves one pondering.. |
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| Reviewed by Divinity 11 |
1/4/2004 |
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very clever!
perplexing it is...
jessica
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gypsie
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| Reviewed by michael horetsky (Reader) |
12/29/2003 |
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| We must always battle to win this war of words...It is in ourselves that we win when we see..It is not easy being human with humility...michael |
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| Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic |
12/28/2003 |
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Noe THAT'S what I call TALENT!!
Very clever...
Great write!
vesna :)
Happy New Year!!! |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) |
12/23/2003 |
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| How did I miss this Paul?? This is so clever and unique, you're so smart. Merry Christmas, milk and cookies are ready, have you got your Santa suit on? Have a beautiful christmas Paul and a wonderful New Year. |
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| Reviewed by Sheila Jones (Reader) |
12/21/2003 |
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Truly, a skillful write...
Superb Paul!
Happy Holidays
Sheila |
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| Reviewed by Birdie Houston |
12/21/2003 |
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| Penned fantastically super!!!!! |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
12/21/2003 |
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| very well crafted! excellent .... |
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| Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader) |
12/20/2003 |
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| Paul, you have the gift of bard.....Brilliant! ty, and Merry Christmas, Love, Dani |
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| Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya |
12/19/2003 |
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| paul....gem of a write...happy holidays my friend!!!! |
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| Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz |
12/19/2003 |
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Supercalifragilisticexpialidocious!!!
In other words...a great piece. |
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| Reviewed by Trixie Love |
12/19/2003 |
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Hi Paul,
I must agree with everyone
This is a great write...
Happy Holidays...
Trixie :) |
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| Reviewed by Marilyn Seray |
12/18/2003 |
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| cleverly done, and beautiful. This sort of reminds me of a story told by somene and the next person picks it up. |
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| Reviewed by Kate Clifford |
12/18/2003 |
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| Extremely creative write! |
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| Reviewed by Christine Morell |
12/18/2003 |
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You got my brain going here, Paul. Very creative and meaningful.
Excellent
~Chrissie |
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| Reviewed by Leland Waldrip |
12/18/2003 |
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Arguable contrariness, Paul. LOL. Thought provoking piece.
Best regards,
Leland |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
12/18/2003 |
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| Thought-provoking and deeply meaningful. Interestingly crafted as well. Love and peace, Regis. |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
12/18/2003 |
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| Wow! That took some figuring, and fingering;-)Wonderful results Paul, in the sage message! Happy Holidays to you and yours! |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
12/18/2003 |
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I have to take a week to figure this out...so you can do in the
meantime...lol!!
Verrry well done Paul!!
It took me quite a while to figure out what the secret is!!
But I think I got it......do I? |
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| Reviewed by Tami Ryan |
12/18/2003 |
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Wow. Oh boy, I connected with this line:
"Confinement, a method of being protected."
Good write, Paul! |
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| Reviewed by A PAX |
12/18/2003 |
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My highest compliment to you....WISH I WROTE IT!!!
PAX
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| Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers |
12/18/2003 |
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| Excellently penned Paul. The message is quite clear too. Lisa |
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| Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU |
12/18/2003 |
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This is a poem that one can "Go Figure!!!" how his/her world is felt.
"Go Figure!!!" is a thought's developer; a pleasing message bringing wise alertness. It flows on to wisdom.
Instructing and inspiring reading "Go Figure!!!" is.
May, Poet Paul Berube, enjoy a Memorable Season.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
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| Reviewed by Sandie Angel |
12/18/2003 |
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A thought-provoking piece, Paul!
Happy Holidays to you!
May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o) |
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