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It is a strange feeling to step out of yourself
unattached from the ground of the physical world
It feels as if everything you have ever known there
begins to fade, and it all disappears
you float in a space indifferent to cares
become aware you are in another time space
it is a place where i'm in love with you
in the intimate relationship of divine
I took a look at myself and all the things
i attempted to be just to please
recognizing all the parts and the pieces
that sought to solace themselves
the wounded child, she likes comforting ways
the nurturing and the kind father protector
that wild girl, of wanton abandon
she's all about the sensual pleasure
the heartfelt angel, so wants to bring
you to joy of the wonderfilled everything
and then the varied shades in between
cross pollination affected by seasons
aware then of the return to the flesh
sounds of birds and noises of earth plane
my thoughts remembered the exhilaration
the wind bells chimed in rhythm
my thought was of the amazing freeness
10 doves concurred from the cypress
I returned to the house with a lighter footstep
as the world of human, called me back again
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|Reviewed by Alexander Shaumyan (Reader)
The reason that I'm leaving is that I love Teresa but I'm tired of all the lies. You've read about the so-called AD poetry contest. It says:
The judges have played a roll in making AuthorsDen what it is today. All judges have a strong desire to help shape AuthorsDen for the future. The judges are professionals in the publishing industry, none of which are Authors on AuthorsDen. Currently we have no plans to release their names, bios, etc. much like we do not release the names of our Board Members or Advisory Board Members.
Well, I know through good sources that the judges include Janet Caldwell, Claywoman, and Woman Words.
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Exclellent and beautiful Debby!!
|Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
|Debby this one spoke so much to me I have been looking from outside in and then indise out excellent.
|Reviewed by jude forese
|i'll project into that! ;) well done...|
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|This is absolutely beautiful. Thank you for sharing :-)|