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Promises by Zenith Elliott Saturday, December 20, 2003 Share Print Save Become a Fan
Promises broken, promises kept, promises spoken...never forget... Power of a promise- words suspended like icicles, glistening rainbow orbs projecting artic visions, entombed forever in crystal flutes, simultaneously sipping nectar nuturing eternal trust between two beings... ~ ~ ~ Validity of a promise- reaching deep into the pit of a scarred temple, weeping acid tears upon tainted pillows brushed with sincere intentions, lonely are the words locked in eternal vaults, banished from worldly light... ~ ~ ~ Betrayal of a promise- shattered morsels carelessly strewn throughout a kingdom, an ancient ceremony thriving, relegating mortal desires awaiting a frenzied destiny, loyal in subservient bondage, never freed... ~ ~ ~ A lone teardrop A promise broken A promise kept Never forget ~

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Reviewed by Fr. Kurt Messick	2/6/2004

nicely done




Reviewed by Marie Wadsworth	12/21/2003

Filled with hope and beauty. I think people take for granted what promises are nowaday and that's sad. Profound piece.




Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)	12/21/2003

This is Excellent Zenith.




Reviewed by Bonita Quesinberry, R.C.	12/20/2003

And, the Lord knew He was the only one who keeps promises: so, He told us to say, "Lord willing, I will do this or that." Beautifully written, Zenith, and so true. ~~Bonnie Q




Reviewed by E T Waldron	12/20/2003

A profound poem with much wisdom! I learned long ago never to make promises.They always hurt more than they help...




Reviewed by Evelyn Simon	12/20/2003

Wow, deep. Excellently done.




Reviewed by George Carroll	12/20/2003

Promises, promises always promises, nary a one ever kept. Bravo Z




Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK	12/20/2003

12-20-03 YEP_ NEVER MAKE A PROMISE YOU CAN'T KEEP! TRASK




Reviewed by Tinka Boukes	12/20/2003

Promises could be a problem!! Love tinka




Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner	12/20/2003

(((zenith))) i have missed you--this is a beautiful write--BRAVA, well done! (((HUGS))) and love, karla. :) merry christmas




Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero	12/20/2003

Hard to make, even harder to keep. But some always do keep their promises, and those we call friends. Good write. Carmen




Reviewed by Kate Clifford	12/20/2003

Promises are so important. Great write!