|Reviewed by H. Lena Jones
|"So wonder how a dream as this exists,
And by all trials effortless resists
All powers that would try to stay this dance
Forever in our dreams to find a chance."
When that "Change" materializes (for this might be just a premonition)treasure her! My dad "saw" my mom in a dream ... before he actually met her!
Beautiful dream...beautiful write, John.
|Reviewed by The Poetess
|Sounds like a beautiful dream.|
|Reviewed by karen logan
|Very nicely put.|
|Reviewed by Lena Kovadlo
|Wow! This poem is very beautiful and full of emotion. It flows so smooth and the read is very much enjoyable. This is a very touching piece too and it seems inspiring to me as well. It is filled with a great deal of love. If it were possible to grade this piece I'd give it an A. Amazing job. You're a really talented poet. Thanks for sharing this poem and please keep on writing.
all the best,
|Reviewed by Melody Ravert
A lovely and passionate piece of art! I'm seeking excerpts of poetry such as this for a book. I'd be happy to give you an acknowledgement and mention your website if you like.
Either way, I really enjoyed this poem.
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Excellent write John!!
May all your dreams come true!!
|Reviewed by jude forese
|a chance worth striving for ... well done!|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|A tender write felt deep in the soul. Thank you for this offering, John. Love and peace, Regis.|
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
|John this is so beautiful, so tender.|
|Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
This is beautiful and so heartfelt.
Excellent poetry thank you!!
|Reviewed by Julie Donner Andersen
|Lovely! Oh, so romantic!
|Reviewed by Tami Ryan
This is the verse that got to me:
"You know how much youíve come to mean to me
And what Iíd give for just the chance to see
If everything Iím dreaming could be true-
The reason why Iím so in love with you."
and this line too:
"Why everywhere I look I see your face"
Why is it every poem you write grabs hold of me? EVERY ONE.
Always good work!
|Reviewed by Evelyn Simon
|This is like receiving long stem roses. :0)It was beautiful.
|Reviewed by Linda Hill
|Excellent write, my friend...
May all your dreams come true..
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Take the chance, its worth it :-) Wonderful write!|