Yearnings ( revised)
by Denise Edwards
Sunday, December 21, 2003
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Evenings shared by the fire
with longing looks of desire
the joy of losing myself in your eyes
erotic whispers and shuddering sighs
breathtaking kisses and
skin tingling caresses
Wrapping myself in your passionate bliss
yearning to make forever like this
sparkling wine, taking slow sips
between full pouty red lips
passionately, you kiss my fingertips
I reach out and touch your face
and our yearning hearts begin to race
as memories of other special nights
unfold like a slow dance,we begin
another page in this never-ending romance
My love, you've taken hold of my dreams
and made them all come true
I could never find in another,t
he joy I've found in loving you
Nothing has ever been so amazing to me
as what I feel when you're movinginside my bodyj,
joining our lives in the most intimate way
in a renewal of love, everyday
we go on writing these pagesof everlasting bliss
thru many years, I know we'll be
yearning for each other like this.
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|Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
|Magnificent and wonderful poem Denise,take care
|Reviewed by Tami Ryan
|A passionate write. Well penned.|
|Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU
|The closing stanza of "Yearnings" is a paean itself!
I have enjoyed the reading of "Yarnings".
Never rest Your pen; don't let Your quills dry.
HAPPY HEALTHY HOLIDAYS TO ALL.
>>>>>>>>>>>>> < < < < < < < < < < < < < < < <
Perseverance and love form the greatest ammo of humankind, and the catalyzer of the chemical elements that generate the energy used by the doers when they drive the vehicle of success on the road to winners' city.
Drink the dews of happiness in the conclusion of your work.
May You enjoy a Memorable SEASON.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Apprentice-poet by the Grace of The Great Poet
FOR AN EMPIRE UNDER THE SWORD OF JUSTICE.
|Reviewed by Evelyn Simon
|Extremely indeed. This was one sensual write, I enjoyed reading.|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|extrememly passionate poem ... well done!|