|Reviewed by Debra Conklin
|I can feel the aching and longing in this poem. Very well done.
|Reviewed by Ashraf Goreja (Reader)
|A great poem.
|Reviewed by ***** ********* (Reader)
|This is very, very real scene-painting, Jeff, and it is agonizing to read. Too, the vulnerability of the voice used in the narrative is emotionally rivetting -- it DEMANDS that the reader pay attention to each word, to think about each phrase! AWESOME WORK!|
|Reviewed by Vesna Vanessa
|..this exquisite work..Jeff!!!
It's so ...so...er...nope..can't describe it..it just IS!!!!
Ty sooo much..this enters library land...:)
|Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
|Bittersweet...And bathed in loss....ty, Dani|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|I will simply echo the sentiments of those who have reviewed before me. I am not sure what else I could add. Thank you for this offering, Jeff. Love and peace to you. Regis|
|Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
|OUCH! Well Mr Jeff you have really hit the nerve with this one!
Excellant expression, feeling given...overall SUPER PIECE!
I shall miss you my friend!
|Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)
|This held me to the end. Absolutely fine work Jeff. I like how you roll them off the cuff like this. That is the true mark of a poet.
The title grabbed me and the words ached like a hungry baby.
Excellent work. Probably one of my new favorites of yours.
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|This was so beautiful, and so heartfelt, I was so deeply moved by this poem, outstanding,
|Reviewed by Crystal-Rain Love
|Very touching and beautiful.|
|Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
|Such a moving write...splendid!!!!|
|Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
|Great one Jeff! This makes me want to go surfing in the next NorEaster.|
|Reviewed by Bonita Quesinberry
|What a magnificent expression of emotional loss: a tremendously beautiful write, Jeff: my heart reaches out to you. ~~Bonnie Q|
|Reviewed by Al Swanson (Reader)
|Hi Jeff, and I too believe she spoke to winds, as well in had ability to intertwine into many other envelops there, a touching insight into marvelous insight, and moving out in tenderness, unspeakable grace (s). thanks al|
|Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
|Heartbreaking, Jeff! I know someone
who could be described the same way,
and I hurt as you do:
"...like the wind, you could never
be held very long." I suppose a lot
of us poets have known someone like that
at one time or another.
Keep writing these beautiful lines...it
is the best therapy.
|Reviewed by Evelyn Simon
|So very moving. Beautiful poem, Jeff.
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|A touching poem that many will identify with especially this time of year...wonderful writing Jeff,the imagery is superb!|
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
|This is once again an intense and powerful expression of the heart. Jeff you rock! Can feel the pain and desolation.|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Wow!! THis touches deep Jeff!!
Merry Christmas to you dear Jeff!!
|Reviewed by jude forese
|gone but never forgotten ... emotionally powerful and lovingly expressed ...|