by Divinity 11 11
Wednesday, December 31, 2003
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Bugs are so fun! They creep and they crawl.
Sometimes they are big, but usually small.
You can sit and watch one crawl on a chair
Or, for fun, put one in your sister's hair.
Some of them bite, some of them sting.
Some can fly and others can cling.
Some have lights that are in their hind end.
Others change colors so that they can blend.
You can catch them in jars, but please let them go.
They have families and homes don't you know?
Every now and then, you might be scared of a bug,
But remember, you are much BIGGER, you lug!
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|Reviewed by Leland Waldrip
|Cute as a ... I live in the woods, get lots of bugs. Generally I try to transport them outside, but hornets -- that's another story. Barefooted, I stepped on one. Didn't think of anything else for thirteen hours. I don't cut them any slack at all any more.
|Reviewed by Tami Ryan
|cute, cute, cute!|
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|Jess, what Ed Kostro said! I always try, unless they are really way too small to pick them up and put them outside somehow...Peace and a really fun write, ED & Rufuz (w00f)|
|Reviewed by Craig Bateman (Reader)
|Nice economical use of words that evoke a fun spirit for the piece.
Peace to you.
|Reviewed by ya mama (Reader)
|lol. this was fun to read.|
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
i am not a fan of bugs
'specially since some of them are texas sized
get 'em outta my house, my rugs
by buggies i am terorized!!
i love this write *LOL at karen's review*
happy new year, hope yours (and mine) is bug free :)
(((HUGS))) and love,
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
As a rule, I hate most bugs, but I love this buggy write! Cute one, Jessica! (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Texas, Karen Lynn. :D
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Loved this whimsical look at bugs, Jessica. Well done!|