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thoughts in a parking lot...
by Erin E Kelly-Moen

Wednesday, December 31, 2003
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iíve been afraid of changing
still am, forever waiting
seems not much worth keeping
deep inside of me

iíve been afraid of dying
still am, forever abiding
seems one day iíd see
iíll be the death of me

iíve been afraid of living
still am, fleeing, failing
seems iíll never be
anyone but me

Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
© Copyright 12/31/03

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Reviewed by Ed Matlack 1/3/2004
This too shall pass or not...Ed
Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero 1/1/2004
Self acceptance is where it all starts. Good poem.

Reviewed by E T Waldron 12/31/2003
Well said Erin, I feel this many times too, guess we all do...if we can accept ourselves we win...that's the rub;-)
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) 12/31/2003
Be who you are, the only person you're with forever, do what you most fear and the death of fear is certain, keep on keeping on!!
Reviewed by Daniel McTaggart 12/31/2003
I have had similar feelings echo through my mind as well. I suppose it's something we all think about from time to time.
Reviewed by Helga Ross 12/31/2003
Well said. I know what you mean, Erin.
So I made a New Year's resolution (you might relate to).

Reviewed by Kate Clifford 12/31/2003
Great write.
Reviewed by No Longer Member (Reader) 12/31/2003
Nicely done....funny, I wrote something called Thoughts While Driving this week....Maybe we spend too much time in our cars.
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 12/31/2003

i don't see anything wrong with you, dear--i love you for being erin, for being you :)

much sadness in this poem--are you okay??

(((HUGS))) and hope 2004 brings you only good things


karla. :)
Reviewed by Kenny Baez 12/31/2003
fear is a great teacher they say, probably something we all have to go thru but sunshine after shadow, remember! honest poem, joe baez
Reviewed by Josephine Bohen 12/31/2003
and whats wrong with you?
what in heavens name is wrong with just being you?
felt lots of anquish here well done piece
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