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Whispering Eyes
by Marilyn Seray
Wednesday, December 31, 2003

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To my AD family-

Thanks for reading, reviewing my work and for being the wonderful poets that you are.

I wish you all peace, love and health in 2004




The last dance...

I pull you tighter to me as we sway to

the music.

My hands are around the back of your

neck caressing the softness of your hair

Your hands slide up my nape --

and tenderly comb my hair with your


The music stops and we get closer to

find comfort in each other from the


Oh yes…

My head falls back and I see the soft

flames in your eyes demanding an

answer from mine

They whisper back the sweet memories

we’ve made this year



Memories of love and passion that you’ve

ignited in me from a mere flame and have

kept smoldering

The sparks in your eyes silences mine

and whispers that your eternal flame

will never burn out because the end

will always be the beginning...

when our eyes whisper through

another year.

© copyright MS 12-31-03

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Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) 1/19/2004
This is perfection, so sweetly romantic, intensely passionate.
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie 1/5/2004
This was so lovely, just beautiful to read this evening,

Reviewed by Sandie Angel 1/4/2004
Wonderful sentiments, Marilyn! So beautifully-wpoken words, I truly enjoyed this.

Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o)
Reviewed by Mark Mahoney 1/3/2004
What a lovely read, pure pleasure, well done...Mark...
Reviewed by Christine Morell 1/3/2004
A gorgeous piece Marilyn. It's always lovely to read one from you.
Happy New Year to you and yours
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 1/2/2004
very lovely write, marilyn; so glad to see you here! hope all is well; wishing you nothing but the BEST this year! (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in the lone star state, karen lynn in texas. :D
Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya 1/2/2004
Very Very beautiful write...have a great new n luck...BHUWAN
Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader) 1/1/2004
First of all Happy New Year to you & your family Marilyn.

I agree with Eileen it's always great to see you. Great choice of music.

I love how you wrote this.....each line a little tease into the next....just gorgeous.

I might leave this page open so I can hear the sound still ;)
Ty and very best wishes, Dani
Reviewed by Dale Clark 1/1/2004
Very beautiful. Happy New Year!
Reviewed by William Bonilla 1/1/2004
a beautiful write.... marilyn

Happy New Year
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 1/1/2004
A jewel of a loving write. Thank you Marilyn. All the best to you. Love and peace, Regis.
Reviewed by ya mama (Reader) 1/1/2004
Reviewed by Amor Sabor 1/1/2004
Marilyn...How you seem to exude romance in every thing you do is always magical and warming...Happy New Year to you and yours and in hopes that this is an even better year for all you do.
Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader) 1/1/2004
Gorgeous writing Marilyn....thanks for always reading me and replying
Wishing you a wonderful new year.....blessings to you...floria
Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader) 1/1/2004
You have a Happy New Year too!
Reviewed by jude forese 1/1/2004
romantic gem ...
Reviewed by Kate Clifford 12/31/2003
Wonderful write. Happy New Years!
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 12/31/2003
Lovely Write Marilyn!!

Warm love...and a Happy New Year Girlfriend!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) 12/31/2003
Yer all women seem to love the nape thingy, not seen you on for ages..
Reviewed by E T Waldron 12/31/2003
Marilyn so good to see you! You are sorely missed ! thanks for sharing this lovely poem, and the music even if it does always make me tear;-)..The best of New Years to you and yours!
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson 12/31/2003
How lovely Marilyn...
Thank you for being here too.
Have a Wonderful, Prosperous, New Year!
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