Uncovering Your Beauty
by Jennifer Holly MacDonald
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Of all I see, think, feel and do
I notice the world seems to cater to you
But when I look out and want to see
the beauty of man, a desire in me,
you deny me the right and the passion I feel
even go so far as to say it's unreal
now I'll tell you the truth, the passion is there
to look over your skin, chest, legs and hair.
Why would this be wrong for me?
Are you scared to be sensual? Why wouldn't you be?
I don't know how often it is that I've heard
that men are dirty, twisted, absurd,
that women have beauty of body, not guys
But things are so different when seen through my eyes.
I crave your beauty, your passion and desire
to be beautiful and sensual and feel your own fire.
Not the strength and force, your toughness or power
but the blossoming beauty of your sexual flower.
And I know how hard this all must be
to accept the beauty in you that I see
but it's true and it's real and if just for awhile
you'd uncover your beauty and give me a smile
I'd be grateful to you, forever your fan
you've reminded me why it's fun to be a woman.
Jennifer H. MacDonald
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|Reviewed by Art Sun
|A very well written exposure of the intimacy through the mind...
|Reviewed by Richard Christopher Suarez
first thank you for using my modeling advertisement photo.
you've accomplished sensuality at it's finest!
Rich Criso Suarez
|Reviewed by Eddie Thompson
|What a personal, focused poem about which any man would love to be the object. Well-written!|
|Reviewed by Jeff Mason
|Jenn, this is just too true! You go, girl! Some people get so uptight about physical admiration, sensuality, etc. Life is too short for all that. -- Jeff|
|Reviewed by Robin Labenberg
|GREAT WRITE....I don't think everyone quite realizes that sensuality does not have a sex...Good to see another women who seems comfortable with her sexuality....|
|Reviewed by Barbara Terry
|Beauty is in the eye of the beholder, and I am finding that my sense of beauty on a man, are his muscles, well toned body, neat hair, nice smile, pearl drops for teeth, his manners, and they way he cares for those around him. This beauty most men call handsome, but I say yeah beautiful (giggles). This is very good Jenn, I liked it a whole lot. May the Lord be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love, peace, & (((HUGS))), your very good friend in Wisconsin, Barbie
"If I have to...Then I may as well be."
|Reviewed by Sherry Gibson
|Wisdom in the eyes of the beholder are found within the words you write!
|Reviewed by Masood Lohar
|Extraordinary... very deep and original... I think women should listent to you... really cute!!!
|Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
|Beauty-full~ :) Really IS in the eye of the beholder,
& the 'beheld' in this case is lucky, indeed.
Beholder & beheld!!
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Passionate verses, Jenn. Well expressed. Thank you. Love and peace to you. Regis|
|Reviewed by Rodd Jokre
|True story... You women always have it so easy... ;)
|Reviewed by No Longer Member (Reader)
|wow....great feelings here....stay strong with them.
|Reviewed by Larry Rochelle
|"Sexual flower." Now there's a phrase to ponder! Thanks, Jennifer.|
|Reviewed by Al Swanson (Reader)
|great poem Jen honest and true, its ood for mento read this upfront stuff educates them al|