She Only wanted
by jan nunn
Saturday, January 03, 2004
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She only wanted to be loved by you,
to be touched like satin and silk ,
to hear sweet words whispered deftly,
to share the laughter of the heart,
She only wanted to feel your passion,
to know she meant the world to you,
to see in your eyes,to hear in your voice,
to feel in your touch.
She walks now,head bowed low,
the scarf shields tearfilled eyes,
feet shuffle without rhyme,
another place ,another time.
Now she hears ,now she sees,
as someone else feels that touch,
and she never wants to cry like this again.
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
1/12/2004 |
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| Powerfully emotive and meaningful. Love and peace to you, Jan. Regis |
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| Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader) |
1/5/2004 |
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| Always so wonderful your poetry is jan! |
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| Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) |
1/4/2004 |
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OH Jan you touched me deeply with this one.
Peg |
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| Reviewed by Crystal-Rain Love |
1/4/2004 |
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| Wow. I could easily be "She" and you described the feelings of that situation perfectly! Excellent write. |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
1/4/2004 |
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| Extremely powerfully penned, Jan. |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
1/3/2004 |
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| I Feel it down deep Jan, no other feeling quite like it, you express it well, a lovely bitterseet poem... |
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| Reviewed by Kevin Mc Crum (Reader) |
1/3/2004 |
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| expressed well, felt deeply! |
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| Reviewed by Bonita Quesinberry, R.C. |
1/3/2004 |
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| A sad but beautifully written tear jerker, Jan. ~~Bonnie Q |
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| Reviewed by Brittany Renée |
1/3/2004 |
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Unique approach to the narration of the story in a poem. Good write.
In Prayer, Brittany |
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| Reviewed by Zenith Elliott |
1/3/2004 |
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| Painful, wellwritten poem...~Z~ |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
1/3/2004 |
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(((jann)))
heart breaking write *tears*
(((HUGS))) and love,
karla. :( |
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