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| Reviewed by ***** ********* (Reader) |
1/6/2004 |
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| Nice use of metaphor, smart use of simile and intelligent pacing making the piece flow with increasing dramatic vigor! The ending seals it all: the confessional tone and the admission of Love... Great writing, Jeff! |
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| Reviewed by Al Swanson (Reader) |
1/5/2004 |
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| I just loved this Jeff, this was really High, and so adorened too, with all the elemnets, missing ones included, a poem every man falls into, when the time perfect, I am glad you learned the game, sublties and all, a l |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) |
1/5/2004 |
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| Jeff this is incredibly beautiful. Scanturaries are so few and each one we find is precious. Speaks to the soul with intense honesty. |
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| Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader) |
1/4/2004 |
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| BRILLIANT work, Jeff! |
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| Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic |
1/4/2004 |
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Then you came to the table
You sheltered me and called my bluffs
Never asking questions -- you knew every card I held
Never once assuming anything -- you knew every rule
No presumptions; no pretense -- your cards were always spades
Ever encouraging me -- teaching me how to trump the Trumps
Jeff!!! YOU have outdone yourself with this write..the yes of the Beloved should be aware of these precious words...
Superb write...:)
Vesna |
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| Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader) |
1/4/2004 |
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So unique.
You held me with this Jeff......Amazing...intense poetry.
ty, Dani |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
1/4/2004 |
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| Fascinating composition, Jeff. Truly enjoyed! |
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| Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero |
1/4/2004 |
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An interest angle to matters of the heart.
Carmen |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
1/4/2004 |
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This struck a nerve...it's beautiful and just plain wonderfully written Jeff!!
I like to play cards....by I building cardhouses...not poker!!
Love tinka |
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| Reviewed by Sandy Knauer |
1/3/2004 |
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| Another great job! I love it. Also love spades.. when I'm not writing, I'm in Playsite ;-) |
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| Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya |
1/3/2004 |
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| Outstanding write....poetic perfection...love n luck....BHUWAN |
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| Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang |
1/3/2004 |
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What a Romantic, Beautiful and
Loving Poem! Excellent! |
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| Reviewed by Kate Clifford |
1/3/2004 |
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| Fantastic loving write! |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
1/3/2004 |
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| an excellent poem on unconditional love ... |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
1/3/2004 |
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| Exceptional poetry Jeff! Beautifully crafted, a joy to read! |
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| Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper |
1/3/2004 |
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| "I could ever hope to have." great personal piece Jeff, hope she likes it. I just wrote a poem called "Hope." I hope you read it. This hope thing is addictive. Cheers G |
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| Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie |
1/3/2004 |
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This was outstanding, I loved this poem very much, Excellent poetry!
Reindeer |
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| Reviewed by Brittany Renée |
1/3/2004 |
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Remarkably well written. I like how there are no periods for the punctuation but there are semi-colons and such. It is smooth and clean. I like the cleanliness and it's very sweet and tender. Good job!! I really liked it. It's not choppy either. Smooth and sweet.
Like a twilight of candlelight is shining upon a barely lit room. That's what it reminds me of.
In Prayer, Brittany |
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