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Poem of the Weak

My head is pounding,
Stale nails, I think.
My stomach is growling,
Like tigers; I'm so weak.

I didn't celebrate New Year's Eve,
Drink too much or have to heave.
I ate right and went to bed early,
So why am I feeling so damn surly?

Didn't want to get out of bed,
Daydreams running my silly head.
Oh dread. My Poem of the weak ,
Slipped outóItís dead!

And so I'm penning,
This poor excuse.
So much for trying,
What's the use?

Now that I'm finished,
Can crawl back to bed.
With visions of damsels,
Not classic poems--instead.

Copyright 2004 © Ronald W. Hull


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Reviewed by June Thompson
lovely enticing picture

one can only hope it's more than a dream ;-)

enjoyed your write of the week, or was it the rite of the weak
Reviewed by Katy Walsvik
Jaysus, Ron.. another doozie! I find myself just grinning in the company of your clever wordplays and rhymes and rhythms.. there's a mournful tone to this, but you've tempered it with a zesty delivery and some of your imfamous perky words. Does that mean you 'blend well'? hehe... Great poem! katy xox.
Reviewed by jude forese
birthing a weak poem, now that has to be a classic ;)
Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
I'll take a dream of my Braveheart over writing a poem anyday. ;)

Enjoyed Ron ty, Dani
Reviewed by Evelyn Simon
It's no wonder your head hurts, the picture is taunting you. LOL!
The write was pretty cool too. :0)
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Ah a kindred spirit,except I turned over to hug a certain lady in my dream,bang,fell straight on the floor, dream turned to awaking nightmare:)) If that pic'syour dream,tell her not to enter your dream so over dressed!!!
Reviewed by SilverCeltic Moon
LOL, I know how you feel. ;) Silver
Reviewed by No Longer Member (Reader)
Ronald, I very strong write...Happy New Year.
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Sweet dreams Ronald.....LOL!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by E T Waldron
Excellent write Ronald! very creative word play. Enjoyed! Hope you feel better soon!
Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
Ooo my you do have some exciting dreams, keep dreaming and writing!
Happy New Year
Reviewed by George Carroll
Sounds OK to me. Dream on
Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Not a bad vision!
Reviewed by Kate Clifford
Keep dreaming! :-)
Reviewed by Sandie Angel
Sounds to me someone is having so much fun. Heehee!

Happy New Year to you, Ron!

Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o)
Reviewed by Jim Dunlap
Well, at least you have exciting dreams.
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