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Poem of the Weak
by Ronald W. Hull

Sunday, January 04, 2004
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Poem of the Weak

My head is pounding,
Stale nails, I think.
My stomach is growling,
Like tigers; I'm so weak.

I didn't celebrate New Year's Eve,
Drink too much or have to heave.
I ate right and went to bed early,
So why am I feeling so damn surly?

Didn't want to get out of bed,
Daydreams running my silly head.
Oh dread. My Poem of the weak ,
Slipped outóItís dead!

And so I'm penning,
This poor excuse.
So much for trying,
What's the use?

Now that I'm finished,
Can crawl back to bed.
With visions of damsels,
Not classic poems--instead.

Copyright 2004 © Ronald W. Hull


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Reviewed by June Thompson 1/16/2004
lovely enticing picture

one can only hope it's more than a dream ;-)

enjoyed your write of the week, or was it the rite of the weak
Reviewed by Katy Walsvik 1/10/2004
Jaysus, Ron.. another doozie! I find myself just grinning in the company of your clever wordplays and rhymes and rhythms.. there's a mournful tone to this, but you've tempered it with a zesty delivery and some of your imfamous perky words. Does that mean you 'blend well'? hehe... Great poem! katy xox.
Reviewed by jude forese 1/6/2004
birthing a weak poem, now that has to be a classic ;)
Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader) 1/6/2004
I'll take a dream of my Braveheart over writing a poem anyday. ;)

Enjoyed Ron ty, Dani
Reviewed by Evelyn Simon 1/5/2004
It's no wonder your head hurts, the picture is taunting you. LOL!
The write was pretty cool too. :0)
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) 1/5/2004
Ah a kindred spirit,except I turned over to hug a certain lady in my dream,bang,fell straight on the floor, dream turned to awaking nightmare:)) If that pic'syour dream,tell her not to enter your dream so over dressed!!!
Reviewed by SilverCeltic Moon 1/5/2004
LOL, I know how you feel. ;) Silver
Reviewed by No Longer Member (Reader) 1/5/2004
Ronald, I very strong write...Happy New Year.
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 1/4/2004
Sweet dreams Ronald.....LOL!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by E T Waldron 1/4/2004
Excellent write Ronald! very creative word play. Enjoyed! Hope you feel better soon!
Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader) 1/4/2004
Ooo my you do have some exciting dreams, keep dreaming and writing!
Happy New Year
Reviewed by George Carroll 1/4/2004
Sounds OK to me. Dream on
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 1/4/2004
Not a bad vision!
Reviewed by Kate Clifford 1/4/2004
Keep dreaming! :-)
Reviewed by Sandie Angel 1/4/2004
Sounds to me someone is having so much fun. Heehee!

Happy New Year to you, Ron!

Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o)
Reviewed by Jim Dunlap 1/4/2004
Well, at least you have exciting dreams.
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