|Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU
This is a poetic-philosophical flower scented with the aroma of
- eternity and now - pleasing the senses of knowledge.
"Won't Figure It Out If You Try" is wirtten with golden letters
on a platinum frame.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
|Reviewed by Katy Walsvik
|oooo, Sandy, this is my kind of poem... ask anybody! (grin)
I think you used the repetitious line with great effect. There are layers in this, a playful delivery with a one-two punch here and there. ("When do people learn to hate") Your message hits home without any bullying. Sometimes that's how we get people to hear us. Good stuff!
|Reviewed by Bob Holt
|People often eat their words and their hearts out too. I've given up trying to figure out why. Good one. Thanks for trying to figure it out.
|Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain
Outstanding rhythm and verse - Bravo on this marvelous write!!
|Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic
|....great rhyme..being a Mom for ..oh.. sooo many years..I am rather used to such questios...some answers just spurted out..some simmered..others are still brewing within..LOL!!
Great write..really enjoyed it Sandy..ty!
|Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson
|Wonderful write...filled with the speculation of wonder...well done.
|Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
|Neat poem Sandy, enjoyed reading it. cheers G|
|Reviewed by ya mama (Reader)
|Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)
|Reviewed by Divinity 11
|DAMN! WHY DIDN"T I WRITE THAT?
that's so great, wonderful, marvelous, witty, stupendous, amazing, and clever and cute!
p.s. i like it
|Reviewed by Sue Hess
|but mama why? how many times have i heard that one...and wondered what the answer was|
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|interesting write, sandy, and so true! LOL (((HUGS))) and much love, your tx, friend, karen lynn. :D|
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
thought provoking, humorous write with no real answers...but i love the ending
(((HUGS))) and love,
|Reviewed by Gaye Dale (Reader)
|What's good about good-bye? LOL English is one crazy mixed up language.... I suppose one should wonder about those who get round it so easily!
|Reviewed by Amor Sabor
|Loved this. It read just like a riddle with rhyme. Well done.