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| Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU |
5/18/2005 |
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This is a poetic-philosophical flower scented with the aroma of
- eternity and now - pleasing the senses of knowledge.
"Won't Figure It Out If You Try" is wirtten with golden letters
on a platinum frame.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU |
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| Reviewed by Katy Walsvik |
1/9/2005 |
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oooo, Sandy, this is my kind of poem... ask anybody! (grin)
I think you used the repetitious line with great effect. There are layers in this, a playful delivery with a one-two punch here and there. ("When do people learn to hate") Your message hits home without any bullying. Sometimes that's how we get people to hear us. Good stuff!
katy xox. |
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| Reviewed by Bob Holt |
1/7/2005 |
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People often eat their words and their hearts out too. I've given up trying to figure out why. Good one. Thanks for trying to figure it out.
Bob H |
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| Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain |
1/6/2005 |
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Sandy,
Outstanding rhythm and verse - Bravo on this marvelous write!!
Best wishes,
Robert |
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| Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic |
1/13/2004 |
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....great rhyme..being a Mom for ..oh.. sooo many years..I am rather used to such questios...some answers just spurted out..some simmered..others are still brewing within..LOL!!
Great write..really enjoyed it Sandy..ty!
vesna *smile* |
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| Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson |
1/13/2004 |
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Wonderful write...filled with the speculation of wonder...well done.
Allen |
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| Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper |
1/13/2004 |
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| Neat poem Sandy, enjoyed reading it. cheers G |
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| Reviewed by ya mama (Reader) |
1/7/2004 |
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| nice write |
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| Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader) |
1/5/2004 |
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| Excellent rhyme. |
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| Reviewed by Divinity 11 |
1/5/2004 |
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DAMN! WHY DIDN"T I WRITE THAT?
heehe
that's so great, wonderful, marvelous, witty, stupendous, amazing, and clever and cute!
bravo,
yay! yay!
standing ovation!
jessica
aka
gypsie
p.s. i like it |
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| Reviewed by Sue Hess |
1/5/2004 |
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| but mama why? how many times have i heard that one...and wondered what the answer was |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
1/5/2004 |
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| interesting write, sandy, and so true! LOL (((HUGS))) and much love, your tx, friend, karen lynn. :D |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
1/5/2004 |
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(((sandy)))
thought provoking, humorous write with no real answers...but i love the ending
(((HUGS))) and love,
karla. :) |
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| Reviewed by Gaye Dale (Reader) |
1/5/2004 |
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What's good about good-bye? LOL English is one crazy mixed up language.... I suppose one should wonder about those who get round it so easily!
Thanks |
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| Reviewed by Amor Sabor |
1/5/2004 |
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Loved this. It read just like a riddle with rhyme. Well done.
Amor |
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