|Reviewed by Debra Conklin
|Wow! Emotions so vivid and real. Wonderful writing.
|Reviewed by A PAX
|This is real life!|
|Reviewed by Mark Mahoney
|Jasus, Janet this is a powerfull piece of writing, excellent in its delivery, i couldn't praise this highly enough,not that often but this is one of them times i'm speechless, very well done here, take care...Mark xx|
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
Wonderful poem and story. I don't know how I could have missed this one. I'm glad that I get to see this now. Very interesting write indeed!
May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
|Reviewed by Lisa Cannons
|So many layers! I love this Jan, like all your work, headng over to the short story soon.....
Light and Love my sister!
|Reviewed by Kay P Devenish
|Down with the darkness of Night,unless its your dear Knight,then...I shout loudly...'Long life to him!
Your poems always touch me,I love them.
|Reviewed by Ian Thorpe
|I think this is great. Nice to see your are on top form babes.
|Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
|Hi Janet, very creative and outstanding write here. You always seem to write on the edge. Your images are wonderful....floria|
|Reviewed by M.Bennett Hooper (Mikii)
|Janet, I really needed one more excellent author to track right?
I see you will help keep me up nights.
|Reviewed by Sandi Schraut
|I see so much in this poem that speaks of pain and hope! The words read like the anguish in a soul injured terribly...and yet comes back with so much power... Loved it! Sandi|
|Reviewed by JimmyHolder ShyPoet1
|Your poetry is unique and cutting edge...you should be very proud!
In poetry, I have come to like the uniqueness of styles. That's the difficult goal I strive for. Deeply rich images...lesson learned Janet!
Your neighbor and poetry friend:
|Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz
And that last verse (particularly the last
three lines) is a real "sock it to him"
|Reviewed by m j hollingshead
|Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic
|She's fat and sassy now,
Her Knight had taught her to eat.
...pognant lines..BRAVO!! This is truly an amazing bit of poetry..ty Janet!!!
|Reviewed by Susan Cook-Jahme
|Janet, I really appreciated this write - well thought and constructed :0)|
|Reviewed by Micha Julian
|How grateful I am that 'she' has found that love!
The pain in this poem is so palpable and I so saw in my own way this..'she', felt and was so very relieved that she "turned and spun" away At Last...Damn, Oh, Janet, you ...well, this is among the best poems I have read, so much brought me there and the gift of your 'pen'/your way with Imagery and Brutal Honesty just, well...gets to me...
Amazing Piece, so well written and so affecting...
Damn, I, again am at a loss, if you only knew how much this, well...meant in a siffernt way, perhaps, but still...another piece that says one is not alone....shivers as I try to comment, Oh, yes, Brave woman and how I so hope, so very much hope, even selfishly, as I relate to the need for 'Amnesty'-- that there is truly a 'man' /'patient and loving' for her and that "fat and sassy now" <--- perfect, oh! WHAT A USE OF THIS IDIOM...BRAVO AND MORE...
YOU GO, WOMAN!!!!
|Reviewed by SilverCeltic Moon
|This is a wonderful poem. I am so happy that the woman met her knight! ;) Silver|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|This is a great lyrical tale. Thank you for sharing this offering, Janet. Love and peace, Regis.|
|Reviewed by Trixie Love
|Hi stranger... :)
Long time no see....
Janet, this write is
Congrats on getting
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Unique write janett!!
|Reviewed by Dale Clark
|Terrific piece Janet! I look forward
to reading your book.
|Reviewed by No Longer Member (Reader)
|fine work by the published author! Lots of love Janet.
|Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)
|GREAT writing, Janet!|
|Reviewed by Larry Rochelle
|Funny how long it takes to break away, heart knowing what the feet cannot do. Thanks, Janet.|
|Reviewed by Gaye Dale (Reader)
|Brilliantly vivid writing, Janet!|
|Reviewed by Bianca Boonstra
|I agree. Well written.|
|Reviewed by Zenith Elliott
|Powerfully penned, Janet! It's wonderful to read your work again. Best wishes to you in the new year, my friend...~Z~|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|excellent images and story line ... good luck on your new book!|
|Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
|Stunning portrayal to freedom..Hi Janet!
Happy for you IN YOUR BOOK being published..
Have a Great, Prosperous, New Year!
|Reviewed by James David Compton (Reader)
|Great to see you back in the saddle again.
|Reviewed by Al Swanson (Reader)
|Janet this is like so so good girl, yikes, talk about k nowing how to write !! Man alive ! Wow, great stuff girl al|
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Deep emotional write with a wonderful message of freedom in its ending. Love never controls :-)|