Alive
by Jane Rodway
Wednesday, January 07, 2004
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Lunch break thoughts on someone special |
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Skies open up-
raining your smiles,
shouting beauty
from the rooftops,
when your lips met mine.
I fell on my knees-
when the snow white arrived,
when the heat became a wildfire,
when your strong hands-
joined mine.
I lost the sense of time-
lying so close to your heart,
my hands in your soft blond hair,
endless kisses endless kisses-
with nowhere to go.
I at last found a perfect moment-
my hands climbing over your back,
your lips on my erect nipples,
your hands reaching to places-
that belong to the feel of your fingers-
moving, searching, moving, pleasing.
Enter me,
now-
because you already
live in my
soul.
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| Reviewed by Simon Thurlow (Reader) |
1/10/2004 |
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| Somebody has your heart to derive beautiful words such as these |
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| Reviewed by Crystal-Rain Love |
1/8/2004 |
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| Beautiful. |
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| Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader) |
1/7/2004 |
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| Awesome poetry! |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
1/7/2004 |
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| LOL at Andy's comments! Wonerful write, Michelle. |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
1/7/2004 |
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| Wonderful capture of seductive sensuality Michelle!...*smile.Andy*;-) |
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| Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang |
1/7/2004 |
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Very passionate and sensual!
Great write!
Thanks for your reviews! |
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| Reviewed by ya mama (Reader) |
1/7/2004 |
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| this is so wonderful. a great poem |
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| Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) |
1/7/2004 |
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Michelle so so beautiful sensual and well what a lunch!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
LOVED IT
Peggy |
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| Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) |
1/7/2004 |
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| He's a very lucky man, is there a neon entre sign, very passionate poem, yummy, Ima leaving on the jet plane, don't thinl I'll come back again:))) |
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| Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers |
1/7/2004 |
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| This sure heats things up! Great passionate write. Lisa |
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