by Jane Rodway
Wednesday, January 07, 2004
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Lunch break thoughts on someone special
Skies open up-
raining your smiles,
from the rooftops,
when your lips met mine.
I fell on my knees-
when the snow white arrived,
when the heat became a wildfire,
when your strong hands-
I lost the sense of time-
lying so close to your heart,
my hands in your soft blond hair,
endless kisses endless kisses-
with nowhere to go.
I at last found a perfect moment-
my hands climbing over your back,
your lips on my erect nipples,
your hands reaching to places-
that belong to the feel of your fingers-
moving, searching, moving, pleasing.
because you already
live in my
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|Reviewed by Simon Thurlow (Reader)
|Somebody has your heart to derive beautiful words such as these|
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|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|LOL at Andy's comments! Wonerful write, Michelle.|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Wonderful capture of seductive sensuality Michelle!...*smile.Andy*;-)|
|Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang
|Very passionate and sensual!
Thanks for your reviews!
|Reviewed by ya mama (Reader)
|this is so wonderful. a great poem|
|Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
|Michelle so so beautiful sensual and well what a lunch!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|He's a very lucky man, is there a neon entre sign, very passionate poem, yummy, Ima leaving on the jet plane, don't thinl I'll come back again:)))|
|Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
|This sure heats things up! Great passionate write. Lisa|