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Echos In The Flames
by A PAX

Thursday, January 08, 2004

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As soon go kindle fire with snow, as seek to quench the fire of love with words. William Shakespeare



ECHOS IN THE FLAMES



There's a reason, there's a season, and a rhythm to the heart
As endings follow middles, giving deference to the start
Now IF something is missing......... should IT be replaced?
Might it be the missing link....And can it fill the space?



Just because it's different, does not make it worse
Change can spark improvement....based on what came first
Experience can teach us....what we ALREADY know
Fire up our courage.....make the ember glow



If what came first, was unrehearsed, and pure as virgin snow
Winds of change, can rearrange....the trails on which we go
And if we take a varied path...our hearts ablaze with fire
Seductive rhythms of the past........echo our desires




Ever stare into a fire? And let your mind wander?





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Reviewed by Poetry Deborah 1/24/2004
I so related to this. I go camping on a regular basis...that is one of my favourite things to do, is to let my mind just wander. Wonderful write. Your flow is so very rhythmic...love it!
Reviewed by William J. Cryer (Reader) 1/20/2004
Great commentary, Miss Anita. And so true...You render truth so beautifully.
Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader) 1/9/2004
I love sitting by a fire and staring into it Anita. Oh this is just wonderful writing. I love the sentiment in it and I love the rhyme and meter of the poem..it just has that beat to it as it is read. I love that. Great work here. Floria
Reviewed by Dale Clark 1/9/2004
I love this line:
Seductive rhythms of the past........echo our desires
Awesome piece!
Ever stare into a fire? And let your mind wander?
Yes I do and it's a fine wandering it does. ;)



Reviewed by Bonita Quesinberry 1/8/2004
Anita, this is an exceptionally brilliant poem: not only brilliantly written but brilliantly wise as well! ~~Bonnie Q
Reviewed by E T Waldron 1/8/2004
Anita your rhyme and meter always amaze me, this poem is brilliant! Fire is fascination I think it enthralls us all...
Reviewed by Larry Rochelle 1/8/2004
Seductine rhythm of the flames, ancient, supernatural, bringing out the beast? Thanks, Lady A.
Reviewed by William Bonilla 1/8/2004
FLAMES? YES THEY LURE ME LIKE A HYPNOTIC TRANCE

EXCELLENT WRITE ...LADY A

WILLIAM
Reviewed by Christine Morell 1/8/2004
I have, very often :) This is such a thoughtful, captivating poem. It flows wonderfully.
~Chrissie
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 1/8/2004
Love this write and picture, Anita. And to answer your question - I often stare into the fire - for a long time. It's quite mesmerizing and soul-soothing.
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 1/8/2004
Constantly Anita!!

Love Tinka
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