|Reviewed by Jennifer Butler
|Please don't go.|
|Reviewed by Sandra Corona
|Reviewed by Sheila Jones (Reader)
|Heart wrenchingly beautiful Jeff!
"If it's what you want,
You'll never hear from me again...
And I'll cry silent, burning tears...
Of pain that will never end.
I'll ache inside, but you'll never know
That my hurt can't hide my love for you.
The salt of my tears I'll keep and save
To heal your wounds and take away the blue."
Wonderful talent you have...
|Reviewed by Vesna Vanessa
|If it's what you want,
poignant line..says it all..indeed it does!
Brilliant work my friend..
|Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
|crying all the time, salty stinging tears. What a salty write Jeff, enjoyed the read. I tried telling my girlfriend something like this, now she's my wife. See ya. G|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|perfect Jeff, I love how you polished this gem!|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|never did salty tears taste so sweet...|
|Reviewed by Christine Morell
|You say so much in a few words. Beautiful and very touching.
|Reviewed by ***** ********* (Reader)
|Concise, well written prose, Jeff, with such bittersweet passion!|
|Reviewed by Al Swanson (Reader)
|gee to me soothing Jeff, to count those tears, jeepers, smies, al|
|Reviewed by Sandy Knauer
|Nicely done, Jeff. Stirs the heart and mind both - as usual. Another keeper ;-)|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Bittersweet write Jeff!!
|Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)
|BRILLIANT work, Jeff!|
|Reviewed by Bonita Quesinberry
|Oh, Jeff, what a stirringly beautiful write. It says so much in so few words. Excellent ~~Bonnie Q|
|Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
|Hi Jeff, I love the last two lines. Beautiful poem. floria|
|Reviewed by Crystal-Rain Love
|Beautiful. Love it.|
|Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle
|Your certainly made your point in this poem, Jeff. We all fall down, but we all get back up again.
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Extremely well done, Jeff!|
|Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)