|Reviewed by ANTHONY KARIUKI (Reader)
|This is wonderful of you.My INSPIRATION in deed.|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Deeply thought-provoking, Bhuwan. Thank you. Love and peace, Regis.|
|Reviewed by Evelyn Simon
|This was so profound. It was indeed a pleasure to read.
|Reviewed by Alexandra* OneLight*ģ Authors & Creations
|Within every Winter resides the Seed of a new Spring... within every cloak of Darkness is the pure nudity of newborn Light. Within your magnificent Spirit dwell infinite beauty, wisdom, hope and love, dearest friend...
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|This was outstanding, the best I have ever read, beautiful,
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|This is a masterpiece!|
|Reviewed by Nancy D.
|Such a powerful write Bhuwan.
|Reviewed by Sheila Jones (Reader)
|Truly powerful Bhuwan!
"Yet, Iím not in a hurry to die
and explore the life beyond
the boundaries of demise
I crave to live more and explore
the life within the borders of life
for I have a horizontal dream
more vertical than the Everestís peak"
Straight from your radiant pen!
|Reviewed by Trixie Love
Yet another fantastic
write by you my friend....
|Reviewed by Handsum Hart
|a powerful write, teeming with profundity
great work, Bhuwan
|Reviewed by Esra Karatash Alpay
|Reviewed by Bonita Quesinberry
|Excellent, Bhuwan: no surprise there! As Jude said, this life is a journey to either surviving death or entering it totally. It is our choice. For myself, I feel much as Apostle Paul: I long to be with the Lord yet must remain here until my mission is complete. Much love to your heart from mine. ~~Bonnie Q|
|Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
|An excellent piece, Bhuwan!
One of my favorite 'motivators' is a line
from the movie "The Hours," where the character
Laura Brown says: "I chose life."
You have much talent, my poet peer. Keep the
positive aspects glowing!
|Reviewed by Divinity 11
there are those of us that rhyme and those of YOU that write verse and poetry
|Reviewed by Christine Morell
|Powerful and very profound. Excellent, Bhuwan.
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|An excellently worded piece my friend
with profound and wonderful meanings
|Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero
|And you keep climbing that dream, dear poet. You just keep on climbing. Read your work on Poetry and Emotions -- I was so proud to say I read you every day. I was so filled we pride, and cried, at the beauty of your words.
|Reviewed by jan nunn (Reader)
|oh yes Bhuwan..thoughts I have reminded myself of this day '
The struggle between
the desire of my heart
and the reality
of my subsistence
diminishes the radiance
Of my countenance
And, the triangular
my objective heart
my subjective mind
and my absolute soul
makes me a living cadaver '
indeed it is a struggle at times,yet what would life be without..I am thankful for these struggles for life is worth all endeavours
|Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
|Life is where it's at!|
|Reviewed by Robert Blackwell (Reader)
|This is a very awesome write, a great dipiction of the personal struggle we all face from time to time.|
|Reviewed by Zenith Elliott
|Excellent as always my dear friend! ~Z~|
|Reviewed by Michael Morash (Reader)
|How you do this I do not know. Another wonderfull work in a long line of brilliant work.
|Reviewed by Larry Rochelle
|Up, up, we grasp, ever upward, chasing our dreams. Thanks, Bhuwan.|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Very powerful poem Bhuwan!!
|Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)
|POWERFUL poem...That title explains it all..GREAT work, my friend!|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Oh yes, we all have our Everest Bhuwan! I think you'll be spreading your wisdom for a long time to come;-)Superb write!
I think we all crave the hereafter, but don't want to die to get there;-)
|Reviewed by jude forese
|life is a preparation for surviving death, exploring the axis of eternal love ...
excellent end to this powerful poem!