|Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain
|A well-crafted work - I thoroughly enjoyed reading it!|
|Reviewed by Vesna Vanessa
|Pretending not to look at me.
Would I even stand a chance?
...er...would you?..stand a chance I mean..*smile*
|Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
|Most guys only look at them and never speak to those type of women. That's how I got my wife, I opened my mouth and out came something similar to, but not entirely like English, she laughed and fell in love with me.|
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Siren's tend to be lonely, because men are afraid to ask them for a dance. The rest of the females wish they could have that problem, not understanding what they are wishing for. In many ways you have captured this quite well in this write.|
|Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero
|Excellent construction and form. Yes, you've nailed this one right, I have to agree.|
|Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
|I agree with Eileen..."pegged"...to a T.
Grand work here!
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Excellent scenario Jeff, you have the siren pegged!;-)|
|Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)
|This is wonderful, Jeff!|
|Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang
|Is that #2 your definition or the
Dictionary's? Probably yours I would
guess. This is a Great Poem! We, ahem,
Gorgeous and Beautiful women, KNOW what
we are doing! (grin)
Thanks for reviews Jeff!
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
We know how!!......LOL!!
Excellent write Jeff.....dreamy!!
|Reviewed by Al Swanson (Reader)
|you got this one right I think Jeff ! Yep, some to them amazingly gorgeous, and it always good to be so when you play the role, smiles, Bt it is still true I think, that the prettier are prettier inside first, and if you have both, well you just don't have a chance, a great depiction of what men, so ignorant, and ego swollen, are up against, al|