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| Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain |
1/13/2004 |
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| A well-crafted work - I thoroughly enjoyed reading it! |
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| Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic |
1/12/2004 |
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Pretending not to look at me.
Would I even stand a chance?
...er...would you?..stand a chance I mean..*smile*
Vesna |
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| Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader) |
1/12/2004 |
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| Most guys only look at them and never speak to those type of women. That's how I got my wife, I opened my mouth and out came something similar to, but not entirely like English, she laughed and fell in love with me. |
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| Reviewed by Kate Clifford |
1/12/2004 |
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| Siren's tend to be lonely, because men are afraid to ask them for a dance. The rest of the females wish they could have that problem, not understanding what they are wishing for. In many ways you have captured this quite well in this write. |
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| Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero |
1/12/2004 |
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| Excellent construction and form. Yes, you've nailed this one right, I have to agree. |
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| Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz |
1/12/2004 |
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I agree with Eileen..."pegged"...to a T.
Grand work here! |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
1/11/2004 |
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| Excellent scenario Jeff, you have the siren pegged!;-) |
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| Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader) |
1/11/2004 |
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| This is wonderful, Jeff! |
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| Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang |
1/11/2004 |
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Is that #2 your definition or the
Dictionary's? Probably yours I would
guess. This is a Great Poem! We, ahem,
Gorgeous and Beautiful women, KNOW what
we are doing! (grin)
Thanks for reviews Jeff! |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
1/11/2004 |
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Giggle........yip!!
We know how!!......LOL!!
Excellent write Jeff.....dreamy!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Al Swanson (Reader) |
1/11/2004 |
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| you got this one right I think Jeff ! Yep, some to them amazingly gorgeous, and it always good to be so when you play the role, smiles, Bt it is still true I think, that the prettier are prettier inside first, and if you have both, well you just don't have a chance, a great depiction of what men, so ignorant, and ego swollen, are up against, al |
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