|Reviewed by SilverCeltic Moon
|Oh Dale, this is so beautiful and enchantingly wonderful. ;) Silver|
|Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci
I like this a lot! Especially this:
"I admired you
not realizing you needed more
you needed love
not a lovers tryst"
That whole stanza speaks volumes!
|Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
|Very nice Dale.. romantic...floria|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|So bittersweet in it's yearning to have it otherwise, how beautifully you depict the times we miscalculate...fine work Dale!|
|Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
|Dale your poetry is always so beautiful so emotional.
"I admired you
your beauty, your grace
you made me cry
you made me run away
I was afraid
you couldn’t love me back
I didn’t know how much love
you could give
I lost you to the moon & stars
I admired you
from afar "
|Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|So sad and beautifully written.|
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|An awesome write ...Dale
brilliant and romantic
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Very deep very touching romantic write Dale!!
This one really, really made me cry!!
Your poem is written in past tense??
I hope everything is okay with you!!
< < <Tears>>>
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|I can still feel
the moonlight on my face
smell the flowers
in your hair
hear the breeze
whispering in your breath
Very enchanting heartfelt write, Dale. Enjoyed immensely.
|Reviewed by A PAX
|this is totally incredible...i ADORE it!|
|Reviewed by Transcendental Poet (Reader)
|WOnderful romantic write, Dale! There are some verses which really touched me..