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| Reviewed by Susan Sparks (Reader) |
3/21/2004 |
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| Your "flights" of fancy are delightfully creative. |
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| Reviewed by Marilyn Seray |
1/16/2004 |
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"Using the crease of her heart
As the landing strip" Just breathtaking...
as well as the rest of your poem!
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| Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya |
1/16/2004 |
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| Wonderful write!!!! |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
1/14/2004 |
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| Romantically metaphorical and great to read. Thank you! Love and peace, Regis. |
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| Reviewed by Nancy D. |
1/14/2004 |
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A master mind in creativity, excellent.
Nancy |
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| Reviewed by Leysa Lowery |
1/14/2004 |
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| Sweet metaphor -- may you both fly to the moon! |
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| Reviewed by Jenni Kalicharan |
1/14/2004 |
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Absolutely breathtaking....what creativity!! I'm glad I dropped in here today...
Happy New Year, Double "H"..
Jenni |
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| Reviewed by Regina Pounds |
1/13/2004 |
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This is really cute..very modern.
gina |
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| Reviewed by Christine Morell |
1/13/2004 |
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Wonderful metaphors here. Another outstanding romantic poem from you
~Chrissie |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
1/12/2004 |
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| Handsum, you are so creative! This was truly innovative and made me soar!;-) |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
1/12/2004 |
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| you sure can fly a romantic poem! ;) |
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| Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) |
1/12/2004 |
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Oh your a definate ROMANTIC HANDSUM!!!!!!
this is creative and wonderful.
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The pilot of his love
She became and flew it
At the speed of joy
Into her heart
With zero turbulence
And made a perfect landing
Using the crease of her heart
As the landing strip"
Peg
Pease and harmony
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| Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang |
1/12/2004 |
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Playful write!
Well done! |
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| Reviewed by Bonita Quesinberry, R.C. |
1/12/2004 |
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| This is a delightful approach to love, the metaphors are fantastic: such a new thing you have done, Handsum, and done it quite well. ~~Bonnie Q |
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| Reviewed by Marie Wadsworth |
1/12/2004 |
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| Amusing. Playful. This made me think of my short story "Wings of Fire." This is a cute piece. Well done. |
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| Reviewed by Trixie Love |
1/12/2004 |
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Hi Ron,
You pen the sweetest writes.
This is so adorable...
Trixie :)
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| Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero |
1/12/2004 |
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Great metaphor! Your sheer energy left me whith a smile.
Carmen |
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| Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader) |
1/12/2004 |
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| Handsum...your metaphors are just outstanding in this piece..what a brilliant piece this is...loved this one...floria |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
1/12/2004 |
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All seats please!!!!
Buckle Up!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Tami Ryan |
1/12/2004 |
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Aaaayyyyyyy, what time is the boarding call? I want onboard!
Wonderful write, Hansum! |
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| Reviewed by Alexandra* OneLight*® Authors & Creations |
1/12/2004 |
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A glorious flight no one would wish to come down from... **smile**
~Alexandra~ |
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| Reviewed by C. Breeze (Reader) |
1/12/2004 |
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Booking my reservations for Flight L-O-V-E right now! ;)
I'll take you on a ride you won't forget!
Beautiful poem. C~Breeze |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
1/12/2004 |
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| "Attention all passengers, Captain Handsum Heart is now completely in control!" |
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| Reviewed by Transcendental Poet (Reader) |
1/12/2004 |
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| GREAT writing! |
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| Reviewed by Kate Clifford |
1/12/2004 |
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| Extremely creative and expertly put together. Love it!!!! |
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