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I will have to breathe again to be with you
by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Monday, January 12, 2004

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You make me wonder how you are,
the way you are and how happy I am
inside the heavenly mantle of your arms;
I had dreams of a person as lustrous as you
but luckily now the reality is infront of me
and whenever I feel my heart, I feel as if
it is you. Somehow everything I do remind
me that this life belongs to you and all
I am doing is taking care of it for you.
Every moment of my life, I want to be
with you but restless I get, in your divine
arms too because I love you a lot and
cannot think about loosing you at any
cost. How come you are so perfect? I try
to find a fault in you but I guess it will take
all my life to figure out what I don’t like
about you. The whole day I am tolerable
but as the sun starts to set, I miss you, I
miss you so much that I want to die,
at least I will know that you are far away
and I will have to breathe again to be with you


Copyright 2004 Bhuwan Thapaliya


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Reviewed by Poetry Deborah 1/25/2004
This is beautiful...I am a mush at heart. I really enjoyed reading this piece and the graphic is outstanding.

Deborah :o))
Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen 1/15/2004
Yearning and love-lorn, Bhuwan. Makes me sad, in a way, your unrequited love poems.
Reviewed by Sheila Jones (Reader) 1/15/2004
Bhuwan,
This is absolutely heavenly and truly profound!
Exquisitely penned!

Love, Sheila
Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci 1/15/2004
Very romantic, straight to the heart!

Hugs,
Maria
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 1/14/2004
Romantically emotive and meaningful. Thank you, Bhuwan. Love and peace to you. Regis
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie 1/14/2004
Oh how beautiful this was, it was just exquisitely beautiful, I loved the poem so very much,

Reindeer
Reviewed by Simon Thurlow (Reader) 1/14/2004
Wow Bhuwan. You peoms are so profound yet rich in tapestry. Great write
Reviewed by Nancy D. 1/13/2004
A romantic you are, leaves me breathless, excellent.

Nancy
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson 1/13/2004
A romantic wonder here...
Have a great night Bhuwan.....
Reviewed by Kate Clifford 1/13/2004
Excellent write!
Reviewed by Trixie Love 1/13/2004
Bhuwan, This is such
a beautiful romantic write....

Excellent....


Trixie :)
Reviewed by Alexandra* OneLight*® Authors & Creations 1/13/2004
Exquisitely beautiful blend, in words expressing the sentiment and complemented by gorgeous art. Enjoyed this very much, Bhuwan.
Blessings,
~Alexandra~
Reviewed by Bonita Quesinberry, R.C. 1/13/2004
Exquisite and eloquent encompasses you, Bhuwan, as well as the picture and the words you have penned. Stunningly beautiful all. ~~Bonnie Q
Reviewed by Dale Clark 1/13/2004
A true love so romantically expressed.
Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz 1/13/2004
A treat not only to the eyes, but to the heart,
Bhuwan, my poet friend.
The picture is just as breathtaking!
Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero 1/13/2004
Your thoughts rivulet on this page as a pure cascade of love. Great write.

Carmen
Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader) 1/13/2004
Bhuwant this is so softly romantic and longing....it is wonderful writing....clap clap for you on this...and love the picture...floria
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 1/13/2004
Extremely good, Bhuwan, and that graphic is mesmerizing!
Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader) 1/13/2004
This simply flawless romance!
Reviewed by Sandie Angel 1/13/2004
Lovely thoughts and write, Bhuwan! Your romantic poems are as great as your spiritual poems. Just fantastica!!!!!

Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o)
Reviewed by Gaye Dale (Reader) 1/13/2004
What heady love indeed!
Reviewed by M.Bennett Hooper (Mikii) 1/13/2004
Whew! Breath again to be with you. That is some statement. Beautiful piece Bhuwan. You are indeed a lover.
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 1/13/2004
Good on you.....breath again and never stop my sweet Bhuwan!!

You have a heart and a mind of solid gold!!

Masterfully written okay!!

Love and Huggs Tinka
Reviewed by Evelyn Simon 1/12/2004
Sounds good to me. :0)
Reviewed by jude forese 1/12/2004
your romantic heart flows with perfection!
Reviewed by E T Waldron 1/12/2004
Such love is breathtaking and must be carefully nurtured! Beautiful Bhuwan!
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) 1/12/2004
Bhuwan,

This is so powerful so deep this one my friend
I save.... Spiritual completeion excellent Poet....
Just Beautiful.

Love N Luck N Peace.

Peggy
Reviewed by Tami Ryan 1/12/2004
This gem leaves me sighing and breathless, my friend. Wow, thanks.

Huggss,
Tami
Reviewed by Zenith Elliott 1/12/2004
You are a true romantic, Bhuwan! Beautiful sentimental words...~Z~
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