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storms of emotion (contest)
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Wednesday, January 14, 2004

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i know you are angry
your visage a mass of thunderheads
lightning sparking from your eyes
your voice resounding like thunder
i tremble in fear of the coming storm

i know you are sad
your face filled with abject dejection
the flood bursts forth from your eyes
i hear the sorrow in your voice
can i help you to find higher ground

i know you are happy
your appearance shining like the sun
ecstasy glittering in your eyes
there is a joyous lilt in your voice
carry me to the place where you are

(C) Copywritten, 2004, by Karla Dorman.

*thank you, (((PEGGY))) *grins*

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Reviewed by Kate Clifford	1/14/2004

Great expression of the different emotions!




Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg	1/14/2004

excellent comparison to the forces of emotional nature.




Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)	1/14/2004

Karla a very nice poem Well written !!!!!




Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)	1/14/2004

Hi Karla...Wow this is great...went through different moods with this one...great write...clap clap...floria Oh gosh darn..I had my eyes dialated this morning at the eye dr and I am messing up on some messages like my frined RON ...sketchman if you see this please read your email. LOL..thanks Karla for letting me do that hahahahha...love your poem Karla..hope you got my email yesterday...floria




Reviewed by Regis Auffray	1/14/2004

Emotive and meaningful. Speaks to the soul. Merci mon amie du Texas. Amour et paix, Régis.




Reviewed by Tinka Boukes	1/14/2004

WonderfulImagery in this one Karla!! Love Tinka




Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado	1/14/2004

wonderful imagery in this write, karla! wow, wow, WOW, wow, wow!! :D so many emotions said in so few lines! wow! this is great! (((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, karen lynn. :D




Reviewed by Paul Berube	1/14/2004

karla, believe me you don't want to come here it's -10 degrees and -25 with the wind chill. Your poem was excellent. A world of emotion in three stanzas.

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