The Silent Scream
by Tracey L Hardie
Thursday, January 15, 2004
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The Silent Scream
Today like yesterday, I shiver as I sit alone sipping herbal tea. Warming weary bones from a dream that lingers as cobwebs.
The floor creaks from behind sending shivers to gnaw on raw nerve-ends, porcelain knuckles prickle as I grip the chair arm.
I wait only to hear the release of my breath. As a child my vivid imagination blessed me, now it seems to be my curse!
Creeeeeeeeeek!!!
Spring to my feet, fist bound, whirlwind eyes sear swords. Had my dream come in day to haunt its prey? My sixth sense reels,
frantic I freeze and my mind screams. Fear electrifies the air to a burnt crisp. Silently I whisper underneath my breath, oh my God is this real? Then nothing, utter silence.
With a sigh of foolish relief I crumb into my chair only to hear the clock chime four. “Four”? With eyes of dismay I peer to the door. Deciding as I sip cold tea
I want to think no more.
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
1/18/2004 |
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| very creative! had my attention the entire length of the poem ... |
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| Reviewed by Trixie Love |
1/18/2004 |
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Outstanding!!!!
Trixie :) |
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| Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya |
1/17/2004 |
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| Excellent write!!! |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
1/16/2004 |
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| Haunting patterns of fear in elusive events, unknown illusions! Excellent write! |
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| Reviewed by Denise Edwards |
1/16/2004 |
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| Great felling of fear and anxiety. Awesome write! |
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| Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci |
1/15/2004 |
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Tracey,
This has a great dark tone, and
your descriptions of the fear
and the atmosphere are right on!
I was right there with you!
Hugs,
Maria |
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| Reviewed by Sandy Knauer |
1/15/2004 |
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| I lived it with you! Great job of drawing emotion from the reader. |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
1/15/2004 |
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| Torment and anguish come through powerfully in this piece. Thank you. Love and peace, Regis. |
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