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Burning feeling deep inside by Walter LaVerne Jones Friday, January 16, 2004 Share Print Save Become a Fan Lonely people often get lost in the crowd
Lonely people live inside Broken pieces in a broken mind No love in the morning No pain at night Only daydreams To hold me tight Lonely people filled with pride Slowly dieing see inside No words are forming No morning light Only moonbeams Bring a deadly night Lonely people crying inside Broken pieces no place to hide No more tears in the morning No more train to ride Only screaming demons Trapped in my mind Lonely people silly pride Trapped feelings deep inside I walk in shadows I drink and fight Straps restrain me Until morning light Lonely people trapped inside Last of feeling finally died

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Reviewed by Regis Auffray	1/17/2004

Sadly truthful, Walter. Thank you for this offering. Love and peace to you. Regis




Reviewed by Tinka Boukes	1/17/2004

Powerful and very sad write Walter!! I can relate so well to this one!! Love Tinka




Reviewed by Sandie Angel	1/16/2004

A sad write! I agree with Ed - it's true in meany lives. May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o(




Reviewed by Mr. Ed	1/16/2004

Powerfully sad, Walter, and unfortunately true in many lives. Well done.