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Jason A. Wise

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Last Precious Thing
by Jason A. Wise

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Your death
broke the last precious thing
inside of me.
I can't move.
I can't breathe.
I'm only watching time
pass me by,
thinking to myself
that this never should have been.
I wish it hadn't happened.
I wish this was all pretend.

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Reviewed by June Thompson
very much appreciated-
Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)
Your death
broke the last precious thing
inside of me.
I can't move.
I can't breathe.
I'm only watching time
pass me by,
thinking to myself
that this never should have been.
I wish it hadn't happened.
I wish this was all pretend."
Words that I have heard and said too often, Jason! Excellent expression! stay strong....
In Spirit,
Bear
Reviewed by anne cunningham
pretty intense
Reviewed by jude forese
very passionate sense of loss ...
Reviewed by Andi Chrisman (Reader)
"I wish it hadn't happened.
I wish this was all pretend."
I'm afraid we all do. Wonderful write.