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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
1/21/2004 |
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| I love the way you have done this particularly the last stanza. Thank you for this offering, Michelle. Love and peace. Regis |
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| Reviewed by elois Masters (Reader) |
1/21/2004 |
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Yes. Your last stanza pulls all together . "He will come, like the warm summer sunrise,.... Love that.
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
1/21/2004 |
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Brilliant write MIchelle!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader) |
1/20/2004 |
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| THIS is beautiful, simply great! |
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| Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) |
1/20/2004 |
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| Michelle this is briliant, makes me want to walk around a gallery with you, listening to you explain you images forever... |
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| Reviewed by Simon Thurlow (Reader) |
1/20/2004 |
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Beautiful write Michelle.
You might want to add the missing 'S' in the title - unconscious |
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| Reviewed by anne cunningham |
1/20/2004 |
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| i love these pieces paired with the paintings. it makes me want to grab my notebook and sit in an art museum for about, well, let's just say a year, for starters. you are doing an excellent job of taking what is frozen in time on the canvas to entirely different levels. |
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| Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz |
1/20/2004 |
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Reading this poem is like feeling silk between
one's fingers...elegant...thought-provoking.
You are quite the bard! |
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| Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang |
1/20/2004 |
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Interesting poem Michelle.
Beautifully written.
Thank you for reviews! |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) |
1/20/2004 |
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| Oh, the duality of us guys, and oh, the multi-faceted faces of woman. When you get right down to it it is a wonder that the earth has managed to over-populate itself. Must be that old saw, animal magnetism. I really DID like this poem, Michelle. Very well done. |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
1/20/2004 |
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He will come,
like the warm summer sunrise,
and he will go,
like the magenta flowers
scattered beneath untravelled feet,
Beautiful and bittersweet, Michelle. Wonderful poem. |
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