|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|I love the way you have done this particularly the last stanza. Thank you for this offering, Michelle. Love and peace. Regis|
|Reviewed by elois Masters (Reader)
|Yes. Your last stanza pulls all together . "He will come, like the warm summer sunrise,.... Love that.
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Brilliant write MIchelle!!
|Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)
|THIS is beautiful, simply great!|
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|Michelle this is briliant, makes me want to walk around a gallery with you, listening to you explain you images forever...|
|Reviewed by Simon Thurlow (Reader)
|Beautiful write Michelle.
You might want to add the missing 'S' in the title - unconscious
|Reviewed by anne cunningham
|i love these pieces paired with the paintings. it makes me want to grab my notebook and sit in an art museum for about, well, let's just say a year, for starters. you are doing an excellent job of taking what is frozen in time on the canvas to entirely different levels.|
|Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz
|Reading this poem is like feeling silk between
You are quite the bard!
|Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang
|Interesting poem Michelle.
Thank you for reviews!
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|Oh, the duality of us guys, and oh, the multi-faceted faces of woman. When you get right down to it it is a wonder that the earth has managed to over-populate itself. Must be that old saw, animal magnetism. I really DID like this poem, Michelle. Very well done.|
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|He will come,
like the warm summer sunrise,
and he will go,
like the magenta flowers
scattered beneath untravelled feet,
Beautiful and bittersweet, Michelle. Wonderful poem.