I always remember you
by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Wednesday, January 21, 2004
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I always remember you,
whenever I am lonely.
Without you,
I am forever lonely.
I am waiting for you
with sunshine in my eyes
clinging on this fuse called life.
I cannot live alone. I need you,
and deep down, I know you need
Me too. I have no doubt, my love!
I know, you will come back
like the dawn after the night
like the harmony after the fight, and
like an optimism after the pessimism
if not today, certainly tomorrow
and take me with you
to the land of eternal joy,
where there will be
only you and me, drinking
the ambrosia of our love
together evermore, far from all
clasping the visceral sensations
of our trust, and in that final hope
I live and pass my time
I live and pass my life
I live and feed my hope
with the dreams of my soul
come back, love, come back soon
let me adore and savor you evermore
and reign like the pearl in the ocean
of yours eyes, and soar serenely, like
the rainbow in the sky of your smiles
and never, never again, estrange me
from you, for the bites of tarantula is
more endurable than the pangs of separation.
Copyright 2004 Bhuwan Thapaliya
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| Reviewed by Tami Ryan |
2/2/2004 |
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Oh my gosh, Bhuwan - this is so gorgeous! It leaves me sighing...
Wow. |
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| Reviewed by Taylor Trenton (Reader) |
1/22/2004 |
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| So beautiful the passion! |
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| Reviewed by Nancy D. |
1/22/2004 |
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Heartfelt passion, beautifull writing.
Nancy |
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| Reviewed by P. Michaels |
1/22/2004 |
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Bhuwan, you write such lovely romantic poems. The picture and poem are beautiful. I'm still wondering if you did the pencil drawing in the other one.
Patty |
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| Reviewed by Trixie Love |
1/22/2004 |
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Hi Bhuwan,
Such a beautiful passionate
write...
You Rock!!!!
Trixie :) |
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| Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader) |
1/22/2004 |
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| BRILLIANT use of imagery in this poem..verses carefully fall back on one another..they make you traverse higher dimensions in two dimensional plane..GREAT work, Bhuwan! |
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| Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader) |
1/22/2004 |
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Oh Bhuwan..I can just feel the longing in this one...some of the lines blew me away..."clinging on this fuse called life."
and
"and never, never again, estrange me
from you, for the bites of tarantula is
more endurable than the pangs of separation. "
What an ending....soul write this is....lovely...floria
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
1/22/2004 |
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for the bites of tarantula is
more endurable than the pangs of separation.
Now that is what I would call love! Wonderful poem, Bhuwan. |
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| Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader) |
1/22/2004 |
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| You write the best stuff! |
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| Reviewed by Antoinette Kopperfield |
1/22/2004 |
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Beautiful imagery and emotion. True expressions of your love. Great write...
Antoinette |
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| Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero |
1/22/2004 |
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This poem rolls, crescents, roars,and releases as the ocean weaves. It does go with the picture. You have a passionate heart Bhuwan!
Carmen |
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| Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper |
1/22/2004 |
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| from the heart powerful love expression. a j to read. Cheers. G |
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| Reviewed by jan nunn |
1/21/2004 |
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"and reign like the pearl in the ocean
of yours eyes, and soar serenely, like
the rainbow in the sky of your smiles "
Oh Bhuwan,some lucky lady who captures your heart :)
this is gorgeous,a touch sad with longing,a might heartfelt with love.Just sighing :)
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
1/21/2004 |
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O' Bhuwan this one made me cry!!
It is so full of hope and love...!!
I can relate so very well with this one!!
Tears*
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
1/21/2004 |
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| powerful passion, Bhuwan! |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
1/21/2004 |
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Bhuwan, such passion and beauty of heart and soul,in your words... I know you will have your desire, for no one deserves it more!
Lovely art too...;-) |
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