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  Whispers of Love
by Sara Coslett
Sunday, January 25, 2004

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Laying on the bed straining against pain

I hear you whispering under your breath,

“Get out of ME!”


Knelling by your side

I run my hand across your soft brow

and whisper into your breath

“Is there anything I can do?”


With compassion in my eyes

I helplessly look at you.

With gratitude in your eyes

you bravely look at me

And whisper, “Don’t worry, I’ll be okay.”


Our eyes lock in an embrace.

Whispers of love mingle in our breath

and pain exhales.

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Reviewed by Oirdheirc Mor (Reader) 2/2/2004
Hi Sara,
You have been writing good some stuff lately.
Me I a have ghost writer writing for me One of the management team.

Obvisiously my contributions were not up to scratch. so they have been discrectly edited to improve the grammar.
Have Fun.
Reviewed by jude forese 1/27/2004
love can be very painful when it's ambiguous ...
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie 1/27/2004
This was outstanding, excellent and powerful! I loved this so much,

Reviewed by Jeff Mason 1/25/2004
There's often beauty in pain; and pain in beauty; you have done an eloquent job here. -- Jeff
Reviewed by Katy Walsvik 1/25/2004
You know something, Sara? My need to know exactly what the basic thrust is here didn't seem as important as my huge love for the word weaving through out.. the language and "vision" in it transfixed me. I think it's quite lovely. love, katy xox.
Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader) 1/25/2004
Everytime I ask my wife, can I do something, or how do you feel? She always says that she will be alright. Standard answer. I liked this poem.
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 1/25/2004
Very painful and moving piece Sara!!

I really do hope you and everyone you care about is okay!!

Warm love & huggs

Reviewed by Mr. Ed 1/25/2004
My first thought, someone was having a nightmare, and you consoled them. I guess childbearing makes more sense. Good though!
Reviewed by Sandie Angel 1/25/2004
I also wondered about whether this is a moment of childbirth, at least somehow I've read it that way. If it is, it is a wonderful piece capturing that special moment. Great write indeed!

May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
Reviewed by Ian Thorpe 1/25/2004
I wasn't sure what this was about either but it is enormously good.
Reviewed by Leland Waldrip 1/25/2004
Childbirth and a moment of tenderness between parents? Or something else? A beauty in either case.
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