wordsong (revised, reposted)
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
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i lift my pen
and from it flows music
at least i hope it does
my singing voice
is not that melodious
but i still love to sing
raise my voice in celebration
that's what i do
with my writing
sing, making a joyful noise
from the heart
from my innermost parts
of my being
the depths of my soul
so i raise my pen
and from it flows
(C) Copywritten, 2003, Revised, 2004, by Karla Dorman.
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|Reviewed by Simon Thurlow (Reader)
|Beautiful (and wise) words|
|Reviewed by Calendula Petal (Reader)
|and I hear all those words loud and clear and it IS music to my ears....you are such a lovely person you know.....oh and I forgot to say.....this was perfect.|
|Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster
|As wonderful as the first time I read it. Great writing.|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Yeah And the beat goes on!!
Love this one Karla!!
|Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)
|karla, your poems are always inspiring. Thanks for sharing the wordsong.|
|Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen
This is a wonderful poem, keep those wordsongs coming...
|Reviewed by jude forese
|the concept and delivery is superb!|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Lyrical and melodic, beautifully delivered Karla!Sing away beautiful lady;-)|
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|Karla, hope your neighbors understand that you are singing, when you write? They may call the police thinking your being tortured, LOL!? This is very pretty, as I bet, your voice really is? Peace, Ed & Rufuz|
|Reviewed by A PAX
|wish i wrote this :)|
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Very melodious WORDSONG!|
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Your music flows so well from your pen! This is a great write!|
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
This is absolutely wonderful; this blew me away! You keep on writing, sweetie; I am in awe of how much you have improved! May you become a published BESTSELLING author; that way, I can say, "I knew her when..." Don't EVER give up writing; keep on writing! You have a gift, and this gift NEEDS to be shared around the world!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your fan and your twin, Karen Lynn. :D
|Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
|This is wonderful poetry!!!!|
|Reviewed by Evelyn Simon
|Yeah, Karla, keep that pen going girl.