|Reviewed by Simon Thurlow (Reader)
|Painfully accurate write|
|Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
|So very true...I went to the city the other day......and I could almost hear the lack of birds.....sooooo sad.
You wake up people with your writes....that's a great thing.
|Reviewed by Christine Morell
|Beautifully expressed. I love this.
|Reviewed by Jim Dunlap
|What a tragedy. Yes, you are right. No one listens.|
|Reviewed by andrea coltman
|Enjoyed this...best wishes Andrea|
|Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
|Reviewed by jude forese
|disturbing, accurate message expressed powerfully ...|
|Reviewed by SilverCeltic Moon
|I really loved the lines all through, but the last two clinched it for me...awesome write! ;) Silver|
|Reviewed by Leysa Lowery
|Nicely done -- I think you are worth listening to!|
|Reviewed by ya mama (Reader)
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
|A great poem, if you find someone to listen you have found a treasure.|
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|a sad write,
written by one of the best
I love your work
enjoy reading it much
|Reviewed by Michael Morash (Reader)
|Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
|This is ONE sad poem. the visuals that I got are super fantastic.
very well done!
|Reviewed by Sanil nath (Reader)
|This is an excellent write ...
|Reviewed by Dale Clark
|This is so good. Great.|
|Reviewed by M Flack
|Your poetry speaks more then anyone could ever express. The pain and angst is very real. Well said and very Gothic in nature...|
|Reviewed by Lynn Barry
|Sometimes you can be in a crowded room and still feel lonely and alone...but us readers in the den listen...and care...this is a powerful piece..|
|Reviewed by Sheila Jones (Reader)
I feel the hopelessness and pain in your words, truly powerful!
This is a premium write!
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
*tears* excellent, truthful write
i'll hush, so you can talk--i'll listen (((HUGS)))
|Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
|YOU Got That Right!!!!
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|'Tis one of the worse feeling of total frustraition, written in real style!|
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|Sad write but exquisitely done|
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|Heartfelt and sad write, Reindeer; but beautifully penned! Well done, my friend!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :(
|Reviewed by Calendula Petal (Reader)
|the sad part, is that this is true. Takes a wonderful piece of work like this to jolt us into realising it.
Such a moving piece.
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Retta you penned a real heartfelt very well known emotion and
frustration...i know this all too well girl!!
Best of luck and warm huggs dear friend!!
|Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
This is painful and I can relate no one listens that pic girlfriend wow...
HUGS and Love
|Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
|Reindeer..this touched me to the core...I have felt this way....and awful feeling it is..you have penned it so expressively...I agree with Jill...God will always listen...great writing from you again...floria|
|Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle
|It is so sad when we cry out only to have no one listen, or so it seems. God always listens, but sometimes, it does not seem that He is enough to solve the worldly shame that we often feel, even though, it's true that He does hear.
|Reviewed by Donna Quesinberry
|interesting - likening the death
conversations with life
|Reviewed by Trixie Love
We must be on the same page
this morning... :)
|Reviewed by Andi Chrisman (Reader)
|are you inside my head? You always write how I feel. :) Another great one Retta!|
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Been there. Great write!|
|Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
|Very true in many a case
They only hear what they want too.
Well penned Rein
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|You pen this write of loneliness extremely powerfully, Reindeer.|
|Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
|An excellent depiction of lonliness. Great job. Lisa|
|Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)
|Reminds me of Simon and Gurfunkel number..sound of silence//people hearing without listening...|
|Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster
|Maybe you are talking to the wrong people or person? An excellent and insightful write.|
|Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
|This speaks of a special kind of despair, and speaks
it well, Retta!