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No One Listens Anymore...
by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

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No One Listens Anymore…



Shhh…
I’m trying to tell you something,
But speaking was always hard,
There was always too many people talking,
And no one listens anymore…

Listen,
I’m trying to tell you something,
But my voice is too soft,
And you are always talking…

Hush love,
My heart is breaking,
My tears are drowning me,
And I need someone to listen,
But you are speaking when I am,
And not hearing a word I say…

The world’s gone too quiet,
I can’t hear anything,
What happened to the birds?
Why aren’t they singing?

I’m trying to tell you something,
But I keep losing my train of thought,
My voice has left me,
And my pen has run out of ink…

I tried and tried,
But it’s over now,
I’ve gone quiet again,
The pain inside is eating me alive,
But that’s okay,
It didn’t matter anyway,

Cause no one listens anymore,
And I’ve shut the door…

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Reviewed by Simon Thurlow (Reader)
Painfully accurate write
Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
So very true...I went to the city the other day......and I could almost hear the lack of birds.....sooooo sad.

You wake up people with your writes....that's a great thing.

ty, Dani
Reviewed by Christine Morell
Beautifully expressed. I love this.
~Chrissie
Reviewed by Jim Dunlap
What a tragedy. Yes, you are right. No one listens.
Reviewed by andrea coltman
Enjoyed this...best wishes Andrea
Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Excellent write.....BHUWAN
Reviewed by jude forese
disturbing, accurate message expressed powerfully ...
Reviewed by SilverCeltic Moon
I really loved the lines all through, but the last two clinched it for me...awesome write! ;) Silver
Reviewed by Leysa Lowery
Nicely done -- I think you are worth listening to!
Reviewed by ya mama (Reader)
excellent!!
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
A great poem, if you find someone to listen you have found a treasure.
Reviewed by William Bonilla
a sad write,
written by one of the best
I love your work
enjoy reading it much

William
Reviewed by Michael Morash (Reader)
Perfection.

Michael
Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
This is ONE sad poem. the visuals that I got are super fantastic.
very well done!
Reviewed by Sanil nath (Reader)
This is an excellent write ...

Reviewed by Dale Clark
This is so good. Great.
Reviewed by M Flack
Your poetry speaks more then anyone could ever express. The pain and angst is very real. Well said and very Gothic in nature...
Reviewed by Lynn Barry
Sometimes you can be in a crowded room and still feel lonely and alone...but us readers in the den listen...and care...this is a powerful piece..
Reviewed by Sheila Jones (Reader)
Retta,
I feel the hopelessness and pain in your words, truly powerful!
This is a premium write!

Love, Sheila
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
(((reindeer)))

*tears* excellent, truthful write

i'll hush, so you can talk--i'll listen (((HUGS)))

love,

karla. :(
Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
YOU Got That Right!!!!


TRASK
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
'Tis one of the worse feeling of total frustraition, written in real style!
Reviewed by George Carroll
Sad write but exquisitely done
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
Heartfelt and sad write, Reindeer; but beautifully penned! Well done, my friend!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :(
Reviewed by Calendula Petal (Reader)
the sad part, is that this is true. Takes a wonderful piece of work like this to jolt us into realising it.
Such a moving piece.
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Retta you penned a real heartfelt very well known emotion and

frustration...i know this all too well girl!!

Best of luck and warm huggs dear friend!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Rein,
This is painful and I can relate no one listens that pic girlfriend wow...

HUGS and Love
Peggy
Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reindeer..this touched me to the core...I have felt this way....and awful feeling it is..you have penned it so expressively...I agree with Jill...God will always listen...great writing from you again...floria
Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle
It is so sad when we cry out only to have no one listen, or so it seems. God always listens, but sometimes, it does not seem that He is enough to solve the worldly shame that we often feel, even though, it's true that He does hear.
Take care.
Great write.
Jill :)
Reviewed by Donna Quesinberry
interesting - likening the death
conversations with life

thanks,
d.
Reviewed by Trixie Love
Hi Retta,
We must be on the same page
this morning... :)

Superly done!!!


Hugs,
Trixie :)
Reviewed by Andi Chrisman (Reader)
are you inside my head? You always write how I feel. :) Another great one Retta!
Reviewed by Kate Clifford
Been there. Great write!
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
Very true in many a case
They only hear what they want too.
Well penned Rein
Reviewed by Mr. Ed
You pen this write of loneliness extremely powerfully, Reindeer.
Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
An excellent depiction of lonliness. Great job. Lisa
Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)
Reminds me of Simon and Gurfunkel number..sound of silence//people hearing without listening...
Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster
Maybe you are talking to the wrong people or person? An excellent and insightful write.
Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
This speaks of a special kind of despair, and speaks
it well, Retta!
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