Blades in the Night
by Robin A Spicer
Wednesday, January 28, 2004
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Dark memories
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Blades in the Night
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Each night I sit gazing at the screen
My face is lit by pale green light
The room behind so dark and unseeing,
As I sit and read, sometimes till morning light
When all seems silent and at peace,
Silence shattered by thumping of blades.
My mind goes back to another time and place.
Memories, of dim and darker shades.
In my mind, the world turns to green.
The pattering sound, of monsoon rain.
Blood red sunsets fill the scene
Deep within, I feel the pain.
I curse the sound of those infernal blades,
That flies across the sky each night.
But as the sound slowly fades
I realize it is just a mercy flight.
I realize that I have held my breath,
As my mind has conjured imagined fears,
A time when the blades, spoke of Death.
I exhale and wipe away my tears.
Robin. A. Spicer © 28th January 2004
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| Reviewed by Simon Thurlow (Reader) |
2/3/2004 |
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| A vivid write. One can take so many differing images from it |
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| Reviewed by Tami Ryan |
1/28/2004 |
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| This is wonderful work, Robin. Thank you. |
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| Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU |
1/28/2004 |
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"Blades in the Night" - This is ((((((((((Great!)))))))))I am retiring now with the body of my mind fully fed. This is another masterpiece!
The closing lines locked this treasure with golden keys:
"A time when the blades, spoke of Death.
I exhale and wipe away my tears."
I did enjoy this sage composition.
Thank You, Poet Robin A. Spicer for being a bricklayer in the building of the tower of culture, knowledge and wonders.
Healthy Happy Day.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
04:05 GMT
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| Reviewed by Christine Morell |
1/28/2004 |
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A powerful and engrossing poem, Robin, which I find moving. Extremely well written
~Chrissie |
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