|Reviewed by Katryn Dougherty
reminds me of my own little ones this past winter
my youngest would always try and get me as she got off the bus
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|Nice one, Jackie; so enjoyed this snowball fight! Ahh, those were the days...such fond memories!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
*whiff* i ducked :)
but what a creative chilly write!
first stanza, third line, did you mean "ruckus?"
(((HUGS))) and love,
|Reviewed by ya mama (Reader)
|Reviewed by andrea coltman
|Enjoyed reading this..warmer reading than out doing...my kids are loving the snow!!! Best wishes Andrea|
|Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
|Enjoyed this much!!!|
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|LOL snowball fights are fun :-) Wonderful uplifting write!|
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|Well done very creative
|Reviewed by Jackie Brooks
|Pam - I won by default I believe, Jim cheated, he ducked!!!!
Ed - You'd better watch out, remember David and Goliath. My aim is generally very accurate, I usually get them into the left ear!!!!
Jackie <> <
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|OK, Jackie. I have my super duper Atlantic shooting sling shot set up - here comes one at ya! (It will be there tomorrow.)
Very nice poem!
|Reviewed by Pamela Kimmell
|What a wonderful acrostic poem Jackie! These aren't easy to do but you certainly did a real winner.....wish our snow here was "snowball" type but it's fine and powdery and not wet enough for a decent snowball fight!!! So now I have to know - did you or Jim "win" the fight???????|
|Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU
|"Snow Ball Fight (Acrostic)" - I enjoy this acrostic! It is a composition if free verse that flows wonderfuly.
Thank You, Sublime Poet, for being a bricklayer in the building of the tower of Grace and wonders!
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Most excellently written Jackie!!
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|Wonderful and inspiring AND descriptive. Good to see you posting again. It's been awhile.|
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|Excellent Jackie. We in the North East have plenty of ammunition we would be glad to get rid of|