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What You Do To Me
by Marilyn Seray
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No one else can do what you do to

me or make me feel this way

Let me touch you

Let me taste you

Then…let me swallow you down

like the finest smooth Cognac

because you’re gonna watch

yourself burn me


Wanna see what you do to me?

Go inside…

Look at my secrets just lying there -

bottled up and waiting for you to

release them one by one

So many secrets that I’ve been trying

to keep hush-hush and now they’re

moaning in agitation

You’re the only one that can take

control and pacify their need to be

set free

Notice how you slowly make them

Sway from side to side and swirl

around me licking at every

spark that pops

They’re trying to extinguish the

inferno that you’ve started but

your breath keeps fanning the

flame of my smoky passion …

nice …


slow …

until forever

never comes

Wanna see more?

Go deeper then

Mmmmm …

No, no …

Don’t stop there

Keep going through

ecstasy’s halls

Now, look at this…

Go on…

Watch me writhe

Watch me struggle while

you turn me



out -

revealing what’s written on


Here’s another secret …

Can you see the satisfaction

in my brazen smile

Do you like watching

what you do to me?

© copyright MS 012704

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Reviewed by A PAX
well very well done....very erotic.........
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
So powerful, intensely passionate and beautiful.
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Wow! What a trip down ecstasy lane. Wonderful poem. Exciting.
Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain
A delight to behold - marvelous write!
Reviewed by Melissa Rives
Sizzlin' hot Marilyn! Perfectly sensual and intense! Good to see your poetry again!
Reviewed by Vincent Martin (Reader)
...I enjoyed reading in woderious form what he does to you Marilyn (if I may be so fromal)...~DarkBard~
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
This was excellent!!! Loved every word here!

Reviewed by William Bonilla
excellent loved this one

enjoyed mush

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Invitingly metaphorical and sensual as well. Thank you, Marilyn. Love and peace. Regis
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

nice write, well done, marilyn! enjoyed~

(((HUGS))) and much love, your tx. friend, karen lynn. :D
Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)
Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
very well done Marilyn...nicely written lines...floria
Reviewed by Christine Morell
Oh my Marilyn, this is awesome! So well done.
~Chrissie :)
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Flipping heck, feeling hot hot hot..
Reviewed by Sara Russell
Playful and sensual... I like the way this toys with the senses and the idea of lovers watching each other's faces...

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed by Handsum Hart
This is super cool, I'd say you are one lucky woman.

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Wonderful write....fantastic!!!!
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
Mercy me, your hotter than a Hot potato..
A most inviting write I must say..
Reviewed by E T Waldron
Whoa! Marilyn,my monitor is aflame! This is so sensual it will melt the ice in N.Y's Rockafeller center!huwah!;-)
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

We are on the same planet Marilyn!!

My goodness this poem and my "Doors poem could be "One" very good "duet"

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Kate Clifford
Very creative and well exucuted!
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