|Reviewed by A PAX
|well very well done....very erotic.........|
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
|So powerful, intensely passionate and beautiful.|
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|Wow! What a trip down ecstasy lane. Wonderful poem. Exciting.|
|Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain
|A delight to behold - marvelous write!|
|Reviewed by Melissa Rives
|Sizzlin' hot Marilyn! Perfectly sensual and intense! Good to see your poetry again!|
|Reviewed by Vincent Martin (Reader)
|...I enjoyed reading in woderious form what he does to you Marilyn (if I may be so fromal)...~DarkBard~|
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|This was excellent!!! Loved every word here!
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|excellent loved this one
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Invitingly metaphorical and sensual as well. Thank you, Marilyn. Love and peace. Regis|
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
nice write, well done, marilyn! enjoyed~
(((HUGS))) and much love, your tx. friend, karen lynn. :D
|Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)
|Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
|very well done Marilyn...nicely written lines...floria|
|Reviewed by Christine Morell
|Oh my Marilyn, this is awesome! So well done.
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|Flipping heck, feeling hot hot hot..|
|Reviewed by Sara Russell
|Playful and sensual... I like the way this toys with the senses and the idea of lovers watching each other's faces...
|Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
|Reviewed by Handsum Hart
|This is super cool, I'd say you are one lucky woman.
|Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
|Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
|Mercy me, your hotter than a Hot potato..
A most inviting write I must say..
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Whoa! Marilyn,my monitor is aflame! This is so sensual it will melt the ice in N.Y's Rockafeller center!huwah!;-)|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
We are on the same planet Marilyn!!
My goodness this poem and my "Doors poem could be "One" very good "duet"
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Very creative and well exucuted!|