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|Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
|Oh such a nice ending walt...loved this ...floria|
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|Oh, I liked the mechanics of the poem very much but I have to agree with Jim, a dangling, waiting for her to pull my strings, puppet I would not care to be.|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|I think I can relate to this poem of yours Walter!!
There was once a very special person in my life... also
about a year ago he turned around and walked away....but in my case
never returned to me!!
It hurts...it hurts bad I know!!
Love your poem....although it made me so very sad!!
< < <Tears>>>
|Reviewed by Jim Dunlap
|To each his own. Somehow I don't think I would care for the puppet part. This reminds me of an old song by Kenny Rogers and the First Edition, "But You Know I Love You". It's told from the opposite point of view, however.|