|Reviewed by Prometheus Media
|I like your composition, the photograph is beautiful; as if it testifies your original upbringing.
|Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
|A very nice poetic farewell Reatta. Enjoyed the read, love and peace G|
|Reviewed by evan horetsky
|very beautiful work...take a bow|
|Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
|REindeer how I relate to this one...tears.....it brought tears...
the feeling of having to let someone go....I have never read
a poem of death as lovely as this....it pulled at my heart....
a keeper....bless you...floria
|Reviewed by A PAX
|This makes me want to cry.........its so beautiful!! applause!!!!!|
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|A wonderful write ....reindeer
|Reviewed by Simon Thurlow (Reader)
|Stunning yet sad poem|
|Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
|This is another winner from you...deep deep write!!!!|
|Reviewed by Kay P Devenish
|Wow Reindeer,what a beautiful yet sad haunting poem,it touched me,really it did.
It is hard to let the ones we love go but we must ofcourse,luckily so often they come running back,that's the good part.I loved the loine you used about the staff and leving it for them to lean on also the part about the sein their face in the pond reflection in the water,what a great image of missing someone!I really missed reading you whilst away on holiday.
Best wishes always
|Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)
|That is wonderful..emotive effects garnish the poem with own beauty..KUDOS for posting this..
Your friend from India,
|Reviewed by William J. Cryer (Reader)
|Reindeer, this is beautiful. What a tender stream of thoughts. So powerfully woven.|
|Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
|You have an amazing way to get all of your emotion across to us all......this is beautiful...
|Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero
|Very touching poem. Although the offerings were beyond the needs of those who embark on that final journey, it was touching to see the care and love wrapped in that final good bye, as survivors still see life as our terrestrial existance. Well done -- very tender.
|Reviewed by Andi Chrisman (Reader)
|"I keep seeing in the ripples,
Reflecting off the gentle pond"
beautiful and sad imagery. Touching :(
|Reviewed by Sanilnath G (Reader)
|This is truely excellent ... "FINAL JOURNEY".
NJAN NINNE SHEHIKUNU ...
JEEVANU THULLIYUM SHEHIKUNUUU ...
NINTE JEEVITHATHINTEE AVASANA YATHAYIL
NJANUM NINTE KUDE ONDAVUM ...
Great Write ...
|Reviewed by Vicky Jeter
|Oh Reideer, shouldn't have read this at work -- made me cry.
Had to take a serious break. What language is I will not forget you?
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
powerful, beautiful expression of the final journey
BRAVA, dear (((friend)))
((((HUGS)))) and love,
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Such a loving and tender expression, Retta. Thank you for this offering. Love and peace to you. Regis|
|Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
|Always worth the read Reindeer.....
Have a great day today!
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Reindeer, this is a jewel to cherish! Your expressions are so superbly wrought. I love your poetry!|
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|The beauty of letting go shines in this peom. Fantastic write!|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Most beautiful Retta!!
|Reviewed by Tami Ryan
This has a wonderful, peaceful feel to it. This touches so deeply... Absolutely beautiful, Thank you.
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|Emotive well formed, gentle poem..|
|Reviewed by Michael Morash (Reader)
|Another triumph. Bravo.
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|wonderfully moving write, reindeer; very well done!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your tx. friend, karen lynn. :D
|Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz
|Retta...this is one that deserves to be passed down from
generation to generation. A most beautiful Legacy.
|Reviewed by John Bidwell
I need a dust pan and broom to start gathering the pieces of my heart that broke apart after this one.
This touched so deeply.
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Extremely loving and heartfelt sentiments for one sadly departing on The Final Journey. We should all be so lucky to have such feelings expressed for us on our final journies. Wonderfully penned, Reindeer.|
|Reviewed by Gary Gebert
|I can see you down the path. Great writing!
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|A great and love filled poem for a lost one in this world but not the next|