beware! (for kate)
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
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this is all in fun :)
you know i love you, dear (((friend)))
she writes, wielding her pen like sharp lightning,
striking fear into men's quivering hearts--
her words are screaming out in pure fury,
taking revenge, ripping the den apart--
she wields her pen like the northern lights,
and turns blood red because someone whistles--
she comes to earth, another life erased,
destroyed by a canadian missle--
she wields her pen like a polar cold front,
whoever reads will be frozen with fear--
icicles will form down frostbitten spines,
another of her friends will disappear--
she writes, creating murder and mayhem,
the blood's running from under her door--
we can't convict her on her words alone,
we're held captive...we want more, kate, more!
(C) Copy written, 2004, by Karla Dorman.
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|Reviewed by Linda Roman
|Reviewed by Simon Thurlow (Reader)
|lol......oh how they think they have us running for cover !!|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|cool tribute for Kate ...|
|Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
|No, she only kills the men. I think I've fell into her mix.
I'm a sure goner, wiped out, smashed, snuffed, wasted, smudged, rubbed out, pluged up, swept under a rug dead as dust.
Oh well, the killer will have her thrill?
Lurve ya karla, one last time....Bo0boo Ho0hoo....
|Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
|hahahaha this was cute Karla...loved it...floria|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Karla this is fantastic! You captured the moment in great style! Watch out Kate, Karla has your number;-)|
|Reviewed by Bonita Quesinberry
|Very good, Karla. You definitely captured Kate's last two poems! She's in such a playful mood, then you joined her. WELL DONE ~~BonnieQ|
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|I like the semblence between whistles and Canadian missles, that I got a roar out of, but I can laugh aloud, living at home, but Rufuz thought I was kinda too loud...Ed & rufuz|
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Kates hides behind a nearby table listening with glee to the authors and their warnings :-) It would seem they want the blood of a woman too.......no problem.......I have plenty in mind and a twin killing too! I love you too Karla....hehehehehe Evil Ed? Hmmm I must admit I could use some help.....there are so many victims to choose from hehehe. Thanks for the smiles Karla :-)|
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|HI, Tornado Turner it's me look out evil Ed, for you have been KAT-ED, I am here for the good, kinda like Robin hood Robin hood with his band of poet, goes for the evil fights for the good Tornado Turner Tornado Turner, will turn-yer, back to good, or what will happen to Bambi.
GREAT ONE SPECIAL K
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Wonderful write, Karla!!
It is I, Evil Ed, now risen from the Dead, now here to assist Madame Serial Killer, Beware, Beware, Beware.
PS I hope Kate starts killing some women soon.
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|oh, my, karla...
this is great; the imagery is outstanding, and so is your sense of humor! i LOVE this; well done! BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, karen lynn. :D
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|O you are so right...poor men...I want to rescue them!!