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|Reviewed by ***** ********* (Reader)
|Very stark and illuminating picaresque snapshot, Erin! Terrific write!|
|Reviewed by Rodd Jokre
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|Reviewed by jude forese
|i like this! well done ...|
|Reviewed by Larry Rochelle
|I love the exhaling by those giant forms!|
|Reviewed by Craig Bateman (Reader)
My kind of poem. Nice economy on the words and lots to think about in those few, but precious words. The poem said so much more, which is classic. Robert Frost would have been happy in this aspect.
Very well done.
peace to you