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Gravid Gray
by Erin E Kelly-Moen

Sunday, February 01, 2004

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A butterfly cinquain.

Steep clouds
breach earth angles,
dense and gravid, ache to
romance, with weight, mountainous forms.
Silence
envelopes rains breathe, exhaling
in gentle mist-cascades,
falling skies are
tear-grayed.

Erin Moen
2/1/04
Copyright 2003

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Reviewed by ***** ********* (Reader) 2/4/2004
Very stark and illuminating picaresque snapshot, Erin! Terrific write!
Reviewed by Rodd Jokre 2/3/2004
very vivid.

Thanks,
Rodd
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson 2/2/2004
excellent!
Reviewed by jude forese 2/2/2004
i like this! well done ...
Reviewed by Larry Rochelle 2/2/2004
I love the exhaling by those giant forms!
Reviewed by Craig Bateman (Reader) 2/1/2004
Thanks Erin,
My kind of poem. Nice economy on the words and lots to think about in those few, but precious words. The poem said so much more, which is classic. Robert Frost would have been happy in this aspect.

Very well done.
peace to you
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