by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
Monday, February 02, 2004
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Millions of eyes in vision,
many ways of making a decision.
Some actions considered normal,
others reactions deemed informal.
One person makes a reaction,
to the other it doesn't meet satisfaction.
A whole society governmentally dictates,
the other only democratically instigates.
Normal sats behind selfish eyes,
right and wrong only individually applies.
Behind closed doors from sight,
many operate to their own delight.
What turns one person on,
another may not act upon.
In a world of individuality,
many definitions fit normality.
Dictionary definitions become only words,
some fly south with the birds.
Spoken expression meets deaf ears,
understood only by collective peers.
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|Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
|Excellent write....clap clap clap......BHUWAN|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|You are a true sage Grady!;-)Well said!|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Yes very powerful Grady!!
|Reviewed by Jeff Mason
|Grady, I *love* you man! :) I just told someone else to right-justify the other day (didn't I, Brittany Renee?) :) I was telling her about "taking chances," bucking the norm, being different. And, Grady, man you are different. :) Well-put poem. And, BTW, you don't have to be justified - right, left, or otherwise. -- Jeff|
|Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
|I agree with Patricia Eichler
A powerful write too......
|Reviewed by Linda Hill
|Powerful, my friend.
Your talented pen soars again!
Love 'n Peace,
|Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
|I agree with Patricia. very meaningful|
|Reviewed by P. Michaels
|Grady, you're right normal means different things to various people. This has a good rhyme, and it sounds good read aloud.|