|Reviewed by Esra Karatash Alpay
|piece the puzzle!|
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
i feel your pain--(((HUGS)))
powerful, melancholy write *tears*--one of your best
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :(
|Reviewed by The Voice (Reader)
|Your broken pieces from the floor
I will pick up by the score
My friend, You know I have been there before
And I will continue to be forever more
|Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson
|Excellent Linda, well expressed in emotional latitude, but things are never ever as bad as they seem...I loved the way you pulled this one together.
|Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
|And, The Walls Do Will Keep Closing In On You All Everybody!!
|Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)
|AWESOME write, Linda!|
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|Powerful write, Linda; hope you are okay! Email me if you ever need to talk, I'll listen and will lift you up in prayer to Jesus!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :( >tears <
|Reviewed by Simon Thurlow (Reader)
|Reviewed by Roger Richard (Reader)
|Linda I enjoy your work but this kind makes me wish I could be there for you like your poems are there for others. Hugs and best wishes. Roger|
|Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
|Linda...yet another gem from you....love n luck....BHUWAN|
|Reviewed by Dale Clark
|'My life in pieces on the floor
And I don't want to take this anymore'
These lines say it all. So Powerful!
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|I can relate to this one Linda!!
|Reviewed by John Bidwell
|Wow you capture the depths of pain so many feel.
They say it's aways darkest just before the dawn. I hope so.
Hang in their special lady.
You are needed more than you know.
|Reviewed by Lori Moore
|Reviewed by Vicky Jeter
I'm wondering if there might be some area of your life that is working and just does not weigh in as much as the pain. One way to find light is to focus on what is not so noticable. Balanced things don't make a splash. Find some very simple thing that you never have to think about working the way it is supposed to, and then ask yourself what it is about it that makes it easy.
Holding a space of wellness, Vicky
|Reviewed by Michael Morash (Reader)
|Then don't. It's your choise to make, no one elses. Do what's good for you and the rest will pall into place.
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|Hey, if this is fiction, it's great. If it isn't, you have already solved your problem by putting it to pen and allowing the rest of us a chance to tell you that you are not alone. We are behind you and care for you. You are good and things ALWAYS works out.|
|Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
|Hope this is fiction Linda..excellent write..
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|Hang in there Linda, It's always the darkest before the light breaks through. I pray that it will happen soon for you. Don't despair that never solves anything. You are a great and sensitive person who needs God's helping hand. I will pray that you get it.
Love and hugs
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Very powerful poem, Linda.
But keep looking for that light - it's there somewhere; it always is.