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Burning pee
by Ed Matlack

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This might better go under a medical category, but it does not exist, sorry for the vivid visual, but...

Burning Pee…


just started tonight,

fine all day, till the night,

not sure why, afraid to die,

as the burn makes me feel,

like I will cry,

while I die, oh what a bum deal.


I know it won’t kill,

but sure does make me worry,

maybe I played with the self,

way too much today,

guess to the doctor I should hurry.


give it a night or two,

tomorrow or the next day,

if still it burns,

will then go the doc & pay,

hate to do it, but no choice I say,

better that than to hurt,

like fire, but kind of like a sting,

ice only thing that quells right now,

if doctor can fix, I will give her a bow…




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Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
sounds like you may have a bladder or kidney infection; it's worth to go to the doc's, so he can check you out and fix you right up! drink more fluids, especially water and juice; should do the trick!

hope you feel better!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :(
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

sounds like a kidney or bladder infection--drink more water and cranberry juice, it should fix you right up

first food poisoning, now this (((HUGS))) you're falling apart :(

hope you feel better soon

painful write, but a good one--keep writing

(((((HUGS))))) and love,

karla. :(
Reviewed by Michael Charles Messineo
Ed, It's funny how I can look at the titles of the poems on the front page and pick yours out right away. I predict some great poems about doctors visits coming up. LOL...

..... Make that appointment
Reviewed by E Detetcheverrie
At least you have a sense of humor about it!
Write one about used dental floss...old stuck-together lozenges...Barbacide (blue liquid barbers keep combs in)...finials...cotter pins...used diapers lying in a parking lot...better yet, incoporate them all into one piece! Sorry, just being silly. I'm up too late again as usual. Don't mind me. :-)
Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Its been said I can write about anything, well, this is definitely anything...!

From the Heart of an Artist Quiet Storm by Gwendolyn Thomas Gath

Perhaps "..Quiet Storm" will help rekindle old flames buried and long forgotten or express the love so deeply locked inside of your soul longing to be released. Regardles..  
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