|Reviewed by Michael Gibbs
|Linda, you (or your character) have had a rough life that you've brought to brilliant view.|
|Reviewed by Joyce Hale
|Linda, most of us feel this way at some time. I turn to God to see me through these times. It has been a while since you wrote this, so I hope everything looks much better now. Hugs, Joyce|
|Reviewed by Debra Conklin
|Humanity does tend to let us down, from time to time, but look for the positive and it can change your entire perspective around.
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|Where there is hope, go for it..|
|Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain
|Poetic verse which is finely-penned ... a message here for all of us! Enjoyed this write!|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Never give up hope, Linda. This speaks right to the depth of my soul. Love and peace to you. Regis|
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|I liked this, I've had a few of those days, you expressed this feeling so very well, well done!
|Reviewed by April Pittman
|The lines flow remarkably well up until the very last one, which I would consider reading carefully, something seems grammatically...wrong. I don't know, maybe I'm wrong. But I love the way each line pulls you like a rubber band upon which you snap at the last word and rebound into the next line. Well done.|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|when hope seems to come to an end, it's time to explore new directions ... very focused poem!|
|Reviewed by Larry Rochelle
|Nightmare vision. Barred doors. Cold and dark. Scary!|
|Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
|I know this feeling way too well! But things always seem to get better with time..I'll sure be hoping that yours gets better too. Good write. Lisa|
|Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
|Linda I can relate to this poem..very touching...seems we are
all turning into nothing but numbers lately...loved the write.
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Know the feeling! Great write.
Things do have a tendency to improve just as we think we are on our last breath. Keep the faith.