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Haiku: Tornado
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

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a violent child

grabs anything it can reach

and throws a tantrum!!!!

(C) Copy written, 2004, by Karla Dorman.

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Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain 2/9/2004
A well-written haiku - I thoroughly enjoyed it!
Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster 2/9/2004
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie 2/9/2004
Excellent Karla!

Loved this!

Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope) 2/8/2004
a little touch at the tornadoes back will turn off its tempers. a very beautiful Haiku.
Reviewed by jude forese 2/8/2004
they sure will twist you around their finger ;)
Reviewed by Kate Clifford 2/8/2004
This imagery is perfect for the tornado! My mother was visiting my home when my daughter was younger and saw my clean home, Then my ex and daughter arrived home. Seconds later a totally mess. She said it was like a tornado had hit the house and her head was spinning! LOL. She never complained about my housework after witnessing that LOL. BTW My daughter is now very spotless much to my shock.
Reviewed by E T Waldron 2/8/2004
Wow Karla! perfect metaphor!wonderfully dynamic haiku!
Reviewed by Sandie Angel 2/8/2004
Yes! This is a tornado!

~ May / Sandie ~
Reviewed by Valerie Roeske 2/8/2004
Karla, loved the image of this tornado, to bad the doctor couldn't find a cure for nature's feiry, loved this alot, take care and god bless, Val
Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader) 2/8/2004
You are just doing great with these karla...makes me want to try one..great work here girl...floria
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) 2/8/2004
Reviewed by Ed Matlack 2/8/2004
Tornado's you can keep in Texas, Mz. Karla. Only send north the warmer weather as you have of late, thanks. Enjoyed this lil' piece of your forever complaining about the weather, LOL! Peace, Ed & rufuz
Reviewed by P. Michaels 2/8/2004
Karla, only a few words say so much. Great message even for adults who behave like children. Thanks for sharing it.
Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader) 2/8/2004
Karla...this is a beauty!
Well done.
Reviewed by john zimmerman 2/8/2004
good image,


Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) 2/8/2004
Nice one.Tornado turner
Reviewed by Sheila Jones (Reader) 2/8/2004
Wonderfully written Karla. You title "Haiku Tornado", certainly agrees with your words!

Love, Sheila
Reviewed by Lori Moore 2/8/2004
So true.
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 2/8/2004
we call it "Vloermoer"

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Marilyn Seray 2/8/2004
Karla, this is so good. I like it when hikus kinda tell a story in 17 little words
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 2/8/2004

you describe the tornado's fury to a t; wonderful imagery in this little haiku! well done, karla; truly enjoyed~

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, karen lynn. :D

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