|Reviewed by Poetry Deborah
|Wow...Lori...so very well written. The plastic facades of love - the two edged sword. Excellent!
|Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci
|Lori, this is great!
I have missed your work!
|Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)
|GREAT valentine write, Lori!|
|Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
OH this is so well written
and the ending crush!!!!!!
Excellent twist and write.
too often so true...
"You love me in the moment
when it seems right to you
you shower my dreams
with see-through fantasy
you tell me that you love me
using Cinderella rhyme
but your love is no more lasting
than a store bought valentine "
|Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
|heart-sinking feeling. emotionally candid
|Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
|I love the last paragraph, it's perfect...
Have a great night Lori...
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Heart touching write in a very sad way.|
|Reviewed by Lisa Cannons
|Well written Lori
I'd rather get a bunch of daises, given from the heart for no reason than all the roses of the world if there was nothing behind them
|Reviewed by Lynn Barry
|Well done...I know many can relate to your well expressed poem...|
|Reviewed by Susan Sparks (Reader)
|This is a very unique way of looking at Valentine's Day. Yes, Valentine's Day is just one day, but true love lasts a lifetime.
Thanks for creating and sharing this.
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Whoa! Lori this is a masterpiece valentine poem! I really mean it's perfection!|
|Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
|Oh this is so heartfelt...I think every day should be valentines day..
sad ending ...but it makes an impact...nice writing Lori...floria