by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
Tuesday, February 10, 2004
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With hearts together,
life is a lot better,
love becomes our babysitter.
Hearts of togetherness,
enjoy love in completeness.
Together we stand,
divided the heart will plan.
Plan to unite again in love,
get back into the groove.
One heart becomes two,
two souls no longer blue.
Love makes the globe spin,
together we romantically win.
In the early morning rise,
love brightens our eyes.
All through the day,
lovers enjoy and play.
Love in togetherness bliss,
hugs and joys of kiss.
Happy Valentines Day to all.
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|Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
|Thanks Evelyn but the judges don't think so, neither do hardly any of the rest. I'm glad I do this for fun and not ratings or a paycheck. G|
|Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)
|This is wonderful, Grady! Happy V day!|
|Reviewed by Evelyn Simon
|The poet spoke with tenderness,
like a smooth chocolate kiss.
Grady E Morrison, you are, you are,
AD's poet superstar!
Happy V, day as well my friend. :0)
|Reviewed by Trixie Love
Such an uplifting write.
Happy V day to you as well
|Reviewed by Andrea Da Costa (Reader)
|Lovely write and a happy Valentine's day to you too.
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Happy Valentines to you too Dear Grady!!
|Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
|And to you too Grady...I don't like to be on the outs with
anyone...it hurts me more than it hurts them...get back to
love is a great slogan....floria
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|And happy Valentine's Day to you too, Grady!
Wonderful write; thanks for your nice review you left me today! It's much appreciated!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your Tx. friend, Karen Lynn. :D