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  Hair Trigger Away
by Sara Coslett
Thursday, February 12, 2004
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I can feel the coldness of the steel
As I rub it across my face
So sensuously pressing it against my temple
Then alternately letting it rest against my lips
Partly entering my mouth.

Release is just a hair trigger away.


Just a hair trigger away.

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Reviewed by (Reader) 2/13/2004
Hi Sara,
This is taking dramatics’ to the extreme; we know you have to see the dentist again, but using a 9 mm for taking your teeth out is not a good idea, use a 7.65mm instead.

They make a far neater job.

Watch out for lead poisoning, it could kill you. and it also makes the coffin heavy to carry as well.
Big Smile.
Hesione Rhadamanthus.
Reviewed by Sara Coslett 2/13/2004
Sorry everyone, the class I am taking this month is really, really hard and a lot of work. As I do my assignments I keep wondering what the suicide rate is among Accountants as the subject is making me want to shoot myself so I can get out of it. Not seriously though. I should have written this at the end, but I didn't want to take away from the impact of the poem. When I wrote it, it startled me. ~ Sara
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 2/13/2004
Been there in the battlefield of emotions...know the feeling...and the reality of it!!

Not worth the effort Sara...because I would not like to share Hell with someone tha always hurting others...I think you of all people knows why I am saying this!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Gary Gebert 2/13/2004
Very dramatic. A subject most like to metaphor around rather than just plain spell it out.

Reviewed by jude forese 2/12/2004
powerful suicidal vision of reality ...
Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader) 2/12/2004
Don't do it, I'll bear your children!
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