It's the 14th Feb,this is 4 all the Darling A.D poets,I love you!
by Kay P M- Devenish
Friday, February 13, 2004
Not rated by the Author.
Share
Print Save Become a Fan
|
Happy valentines day to all the darling poets on authorsden,I love you....I truly DO love you so very much xxx kisses and LOTS OF big warm hugs for you all.
*****************
If I give you the muscle that beats inside my chest, (the one that pumps and thumps and pounds, without a moments rest.) If I give you that muscle... with its valves and chambers too, will you promise not to crush it, or break it clear in two? F o r … I cannot let you have it, unless you hold it dear, (as dear as ALL the world to you, f o r e v e r , with YOURS near). And… IF… you say you 'promise’, my heart is YOURS to take, but know... you CANNOT give it back, or EVER... let it ...B R E A K .

|
Reviewed by Vesna / Vanessa Perkovic |
2/13/2004 |
|
Ohhhh Kay..this is such a magnificent write..indeed our hearts a re strong but at the same time so bloody fragile..don't ya reckon' Thanks kiddo for this great write..loved it!!
vesna {{hugs}} |
|
|
|
|
Reviewed by Lori Moore |
2/13/2004 |
|
Thank you for the re-post. This is great! |
|
|
|
|
Reviewed by Trish MacQueen |
2/13/2004 |
|
Excellent and expressive poem. |
|
|
|
|
Reviewed by Ch'erie Perrette |
2/13/2004 |
|
OOoh fingers crossed aye! Love is positively the most risky thing innit, still we do it. Top poem and I'm glad you revamped it TY Hugs Ch'erie |
|
|
|
|
Reviewed by Grady Morrison |
2/12/2004 |
|
This is a great piece Kay, I really enjoyed your poetic approach. love and peace G |
|
|
|
|
Reviewed by Robert Jude(Ace) Forese |
2/12/2004 |
|
a valetine poem that honestly expresses your heart, i one i admire ... |
|
|
|
|
Reviewed by AKA ShyPoet1 |
2/12/2004 |
|
I really enjoyed this poem - well done! |
|
|
|
|
Reviewed by Ed Matlack |
2/12/2004 |
|
I am not too good at Valentines day writes, but apparently by this example, Kay, you are the best I have read so far, thanks, Ed & Rufuz |
|
|
|
|
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson |
2/12/2004 |
|
lovely as is creative Kay..... Thanks for being Kay... x0x0x0x0x0x |
|
|
|
|
Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse |
2/12/2004 |
|
Love this one Kay....I love to pull old ones out and rework them....great poem..floria |
|
|
|
|
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie |
2/12/2004 |
|
This was so powerful and beautiful Kay, I loved this,
Reindeer |
|
|
|
|
Reviewed by Kate Clifford |
2/12/2004 |
|
Great write! |
|
|
|
|
Reviewed by Trixie Love |
2/12/2004 |
|
Hi dearest Kay, Such a lovely write...
Hope all has been well with you dear lady!!!
Hugs, Trixie :) |
|
|
|
|
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
2/12/2004 |
|
Awwwwww..if only Kay!!
Just love your litle guyes at the bottom!!
Love Tinka |
|
|
|
|
Reviewed by Peggy Bertrand |
2/12/2004 |
|
AH i agree with Eileen.... This is so well done Kay!!!! Beautiful.... |
|
|
|
|
Reviewed by Eileen Waldron |
2/12/2004 |
|
ahh if only it could be that way dear Kay! Excellent poem,a powerfully written beauty! |
|
|
|
| Yesterday's repost,(too tired to write new one,)just had to let you know I am thinking of you all today with sincere affection.
|
|
|
|
Want to review or comment on this
poem?
Click here to login!
Need a FREE Reader Membership?
Click here for your Membership!
|
| Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington |
3/1/2004 |
|
What a cute and clever Valentine! I wish I had seen it sooner. I have missed reading you and hope you add something new soon. No telling what you could have those little leprehcans do. **S**
(((hugs)))
♫ Jackie
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya |
2/17/2004 |
|
| Precious write!!!! |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by Cynth'ya cynthyaspeaks@gmail.com |
2/16/2004 |
|
Let love rule here and the other 365 days of this another Leap Year. Thanks for the tribute, I know we ALL appreciate it (and those 2 yellow M and M's at the end of your write that escaped from the box, never let them go stale.)
blessin's K.
cynth'ya lewis reed |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) |
2/16/2004 |
|
| We love you too Kay, this is precious. |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by Leland Waldrip |
2/16/2004 |
|
Beautiful poetic expression, Kay. Well done. What a great Valentine's Day thought!
Best regards,
Leland |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by E Detetcheverrie |
2/14/2004 |
|
| Thanks, Kay! I'm gonna put it under my pillow where it's safe and warm and soft and maybe it will influence my dreams tonight! Happy St. Valentine's to ya! |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
2/14/2004 |
|
********************
………..****
…….***.......****
…***................….BE
.***
***
***............…........MY
..***
….***
…….***…..VALENTINE
………****
………….***
…………….***…OK
………………..***
………………...*** ?
Love Tinka
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
2/13/2004 |
|
| Kay you are so sweet! this is great and my heart sends out beats of love and light to you dear friend! Thanks for always lifting us up with your message of love!Happy valentines day to your daughter too! |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson |
2/13/2004 |
|
Just love it Kay......
x0x0x0x0
Cute little graphics you put on your page..
love them |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by Sandie Angel |
2/13/2004 |
|
Wonderful repost, Kay!
Sandie Angel :o)
P.S. Couldn't send you the CD because you have not included your ZIP code and your suite number. Please write to me again and let me know. ~ SA ~ |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) |
2/13/2004 |
|
| Fantastic caring sharing poem, but I'll settle for a hand shake:)) |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by Katy Walsvik |
2/13/2004 |
|
| I promise, Kay.. (smile) This exudes such real sincerity and lovely friendship. Thank you for treating me today... I'm grinning. You're a sweetie pie. katy xox. |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by Janet Caldwell |
2/13/2004 |
|
Thanks for the re-post Kay! My b/d is valentines day, yes, I am a sweet-heart. lol
Love, Janet xoxoxo |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK |
2/13/2004 |
|
Ahhhaaaaaaaa GEEEEEZZZZZZZ Whhhhhheeeeezzzzz I'm Not Your Valentine!
TRASK |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers |
2/13/2004 |
|
I'm not sure how I missed this the first time around...but Happy Valentines Day Kay!
Beautiful and heartfelt! Thank you for sharing..Lisa |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
2/13/2004 |
|
(((kay)))
right back at you, too...smooooooooooooootch! :) happy valentine's day!
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. love the write, and the animation awwwww :) |
|
|
|
|