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It's the 14th Feb,this is 4 all the Darling A.D poets,I love you!
by Kay P M- Devenish
Friday, February 13, 2004
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Yesterday's repost,(too tired to write new one,)just had to let you know I am thinking of you all today with sincere affection.

Happy valentines day to all the darling poets on authorsden,I love you....I truly DO love you so very much xxx kisses and  LOTS OF big warm hugs for you all.  


If I give you the muscle that beats  inside my chest,
(the one that pumps
and thumps and pounds,
without a moments rest.)
If I give you that muscle...
with its valves and chambers too,
will you promise not to crush it,
or break it clear in two?
F o r …
I cannot let you have it,
unless you hold it dear,
(as dear as ALL the world to you,  
 f o r e v e r , with YOURS near).
And… IF… you say you 'promise’,
my heart is YOURS to take,
but know...
you CANNOT give it back,
or EVER... let it ...B R E A K .

Reviewed by Vesna / Vanessa Perkovic 2/13/2004
Ohhhh Kay..this is such a magnificent write..indeed our hearts a re strong but at the same time so bloody fragile..don't ya reckon'
Thanks kiddo for this great write..loved it!!

vesna {{hugs}}
Reviewed by Lori Moore 2/13/2004
Thank you for the re-post. This is great!
Reviewed by Trish MacQueen 2/13/2004
Excellent and expressive poem.
Reviewed by Ch'erie Perrette 2/13/2004
OOoh fingers crossed aye!
Love is positively the most risky thing innit, still we do it.
Top poem and I'm glad you revamped it TY
Hugs Ch'erie
Reviewed by Grady Morrison 2/12/2004
This is a great piece Kay, I really enjoyed your poetic approach. love and peace G
Reviewed by Robert Jude(Ace) Forese 2/12/2004
a valetine poem that honestly expresses your heart, i one i admire ...
Reviewed by AKA ShyPoet1 2/12/2004
I really enjoyed this poem - well done!
Reviewed by Ed Matlack 2/12/2004
I am not too good at Valentines day writes, but apparently by this example, Kay, you are the best I have read so far, thanks, Ed & Rufuz
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson 2/12/2004
lovely as is creative Kay.....
Thanks for being Kay...
Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse 2/12/2004
Love this one Kay....I love to pull old ones out and rework
them....great poem..floria
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie 2/12/2004
This was so powerful and beautiful Kay, I loved this,

Reviewed by Kate Clifford 2/12/2004
Great write!
Reviewed by Trixie Love 2/12/2004
Hi dearest Kay,
Such a lovely write...

Hope all has been well
with you dear lady!!!

Trixie :)
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 2/12/2004
Awwwwww..if only Kay!!

Just love your litle guyes at the bottom!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Peggy Bertrand 2/12/2004
AH i agree with Eileen.... This is so well done Kay!!!!
Reviewed by Eileen Waldron 2/12/2004
ahh if only it could be that way dear Kay! Excellent poem,a powerfully written beauty!


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Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington 3/1/2004
What a cute and clever Valentine! I wish I had seen it sooner. I have missed reading you and hope you add something new soon. No telling what you could have those little leprehcans do. **S**


♫ Jackie
Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya 2/17/2004
Precious write!!!!
Reviewed by Cynth'ya 2/16/2004
Let love rule here and the other 365 days of this another Leap Year. Thanks for the tribute, I know we ALL appreciate it (and those 2 yellow M and M's at the end of your write that escaped from the box, never let them go stale.)

blessin's K.

cynth'ya lewis reed
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) 2/16/2004
We love you too Kay, this is precious.
Reviewed by Leland Waldrip 2/16/2004
Beautiful poetic expression, Kay. Well done. What a great Valentine's Day thought!
Best regards,
Reviewed by E Detetcheverrie 2/14/2004
Thanks, Kay! I'm gonna put it under my pillow where it's safe and warm and soft and maybe it will influence my dreams tonight! Happy St. Valentine's to ya!
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 2/14/2004
………………...*** ?
Love Tinka
Reviewed by E T Waldron 2/13/2004
Kay you are so sweet! this is great and my heart sends out beats of love and light to you dear friend! Thanks for always lifting us up with your message of love!Happy valentines day to your daughter too!
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson 2/13/2004
Just love it Kay......
Cute little graphics you put on your page..
love them
Reviewed by Sandie Angel 2/13/2004
Wonderful repost, Kay!

Sandie Angel :o)

P.S. Couldn't send you the CD because you have not included your ZIP code and your suite number. Please write to me again and let me know. ~ SA ~
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) 2/13/2004
Fantastic caring sharing poem, but I'll settle for a hand shake:))
Reviewed by Katy Walsvik 2/13/2004
I promise, Kay.. (smile) This exudes such real sincerity and lovely friendship. Thank you for treating me today... I'm grinning. You're a sweetie pie. katy xox.
Reviewed by Janet Caldwell 2/13/2004
Thanks for the re-post Kay! My b/d is valentines day, yes, I am a sweet-heart. lol

Love, Janet xoxoxo
Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK 2/13/2004
Ahhhaaaaaaaa GEEEEEZZZZZZZ Whhhhhheeeeezzzzz I'm Not Your Valentine!

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers 2/13/2004
I'm not sure how I missed this the first time around...but Happy Valentines Day Kay!
Beautiful and heartfelt! Thank you for sharing..Lisa
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 2/13/2004

right back at you, too...smooooooooooooootch! :) happy valentine's day!

(((HUGS))) and love, karla. love the write, and the animation awwwww :)
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